Book. "Virginity Sold!" read online

Virginity Sold!

Melanie F

Story about:sex drama possessiveness discussion, erotic sex jealousy secrets

Age restriction: 18+

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Rating:
235
1725 97 22773

Ranking:
#2 in ChickLit
#6 in Romantic erotica


Ongoing: 24 Sep 151 pages

Publication: 16.08.2020 — ...


Description of book "Virginity Sold!"

Marilí Cook is a girl of just 18 years old, her life with her mother is not easy, she was abandoned by her father before she was born, she struggles every day to get ahead, but her mother's illness will lead her to make a decision that for some it is frowned upon to "sell your virginity to the highest bidder" and thereby help your mother. An ambitious man, wealthy, tyrant and with dark desires who always gets what he wants, crosses Marilí's path. A contract that seemed easy turns into an odyssey or maybe a pleasure? This arrangement will take you both through a world of desire and pleasure.

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Total number of threads: 57

Lynn Austria 22.09.2020, 09:58:29

Love it so much, ?

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Melanie F 24.09.2020, 08:15:09

Lynn Austria, ❤️❤️❤️

vicki love 23.09.2020, 18:06:37

I love the story!!

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Melanie F 23.09.2020, 18:23:59

vicki love, ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Lilybeth Edong 17.09.2020, 01:49:02

Please,,, don't take it too long.

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Lilybeth Edong 23.09.2020, 05:36:42

Melanie F, Thank you,, i've already read chapter 14,,,and please another chapter.

chen castro 15.09.2020, 12:29:00

I'm dying to read the next chapter...upload plssss.....

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Melanie F 22.09.2020, 16:49:49

chen castro, oh my gosh ... no, no. nothing to offend ... they were hearts.
I'm sorry honey, I didn't know they were put as question marks.
I'm so sorry...
I am grateful that you like my story.
Thanks for the support!!

Balenia Antonio 18.09.2020, 17:03:27

more chapter update tnx

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Melanie F 21.09.2020, 20:41:18

Balenia Antonio, Ready

Jing Sabala 16.09.2020, 17:40:48

update pls

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Melanie F 21.09.2020, 20:40:42

Jing Sabala, Ready

Jean Dela Cruz Baes 21.09.2020, 10:20:47

Ok

Lynn Austria 16.09.2020, 09:52:13

??????

MaTheresa Ogatis 15.09.2020, 01:54:22

next chapter pls

Shereba johnson 12.09.2020, 00:07:18

not to be rude or any thing take your time when writing i love your book but some part of it is all over the place the spellings and all. now what i think you should do is read over and edit . your book is nice and all but sometimes i dont understand what happening please i would like to enjoy your book soo

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Melanie F 12.09.2020, 08:08:15

Shereba johnson, Hello, I understand your discomfort.
I am looking for a native English language person to help me better.
As soon as I find it, I promise to fix everything.
thanks for reading me despite the errors.

Marites Sayaman Ponio 04.09.2020, 10:16:17

More updates please. Regards to you ang keep safe!

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Melanie F 11.09.2020, 11:09:14

Marites Sayaman Ponio, ❤️❤️

Nikki Thomson 05.09.2020, 12:33:05

they story is great! And I am enjoying it for free so those who are being negative need to mind their own or go try and write a story in a second language. I am one of those readers who doesn't normally comment but You should be proud of your work. so thank you again

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Melanie F 11.09.2020, 11:08:45

Nikki Thomson, Thank you very much for commenting, your words make me very happy.
Thank you for the opportunity. ❤️❤️

Okua Ehaty 08.09.2020, 06:55:29

this is awesome... can't wait for the next chapters

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Melanie F 11.09.2020, 11:07:23

Okua Ehaty, ❤️❤️

Adelaida Munar 09.09.2020, 16:01:44

Enjoyablw

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Melanie F 11.09.2020, 11:06:59

Adelaida Munar, ❤️❤️

chr sti 10.09.2020, 10:00:48

hi! I am really enjoying the plot of your story. all the twists and turns are very exciting. character development is strong, i love learning more about each person. one suggestion to make reading easier would be consistency in pronoun use. I appreciate your effort writing in English, as it is not your native language, and sharing your story! enjoy writing and I encourage you to continue!

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Melanie F 11.09.2020, 11:06:44

chr sti, Thank you very much for the suggestion, I will put it into practice.
thanks for the opportunity, I hope to improve. ❤️❤️❤️

Pacita Noval 10.09.2020, 12:49:36

its a good story. congrat to the author

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Melanie F 11.09.2020, 11:04:29

Pacita Noval, thank you very much ... and thanks for reading me.

Adelaida Munar 09.09.2020, 16:01:11

It is interesting

Jing Sabala 08.09.2020, 20:22:41

update pls

Paromita Mondal 07.09.2020, 15:01:02

Well I have just started reading❤, the story line is awesome! But while reading I am seeing repetitive similar paragraphs!

Sheila Castro 06.09.2020, 10:22:56

love it

Maria Jose 05.09.2020, 16:09:51

theres a lot of shouting, its not nice

Gena Elgie 05.09.2020, 04:30:45

love, love the long chapter!!

Shereba johnson 04.09.2020, 22:53:56

ooo k

Bhaswati Devi 04.09.2020, 09:16:13

I got a notification that the book has been updated 1 hour ago but why can't I read the update??

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Bhaswati Devi 04.09.2020, 10:35:59

Melanie F, ohhh it's totally fine hon

Leslie Villablanca Herrera 03.09.2020, 16:33:24

this chapter is so much

Lily Capilitan 03.09.2020, 14:25:44

I love this story

gemma wendell 02.09.2020, 11:35:14

please update... i love your story..

Cindy Oliver 02.09.2020, 06:20:56

i think your story is really good please do not get discouraged by any haters or naysayers continue on you have talent !!!!

Chrissy Cooper Denney 02.09.2020, 04:29:34

I love the book this far

Emelia Doot 01.09.2020, 13:47:17

Writing a story is a good way of improving your English. You have creative mind to make a good plot of a story... Just be open to constructive criticism... and don't get offended.. It's for you to spot to where you need improvements.

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Melanie F 01.09.2020, 20:21:21

Emelia Doot, totally open to constructive criticism.
That is why I have been improving.
I follow every advice they give me, that's why I have improved.❤️❤️

Ched Daep 01.09.2020, 16:41:33

unique.

Xana Warraich 01.09.2020, 12:01:02

You are improving

Branisteanu Palade Oana 31.08.2020, 22:35:32

The storry is amazing, and don't worry we can understand , even if there are some mistakes in spelling. I'm totally captivated by the book. Bravo!!!

Susan Tagacay 31.08.2020, 14:16:06

very interesting story!!

Ayushi Gupta 31.08.2020, 13:20:16

hey dear❤️ I love ur story line ❤️ i know English is not your 1st language but u are trying & it's great u improved a lot u wrote chapter 7 quiet well keep it up girl❤️

okpamcecilia@gmail.com 31.08.2020, 09:32:02

interesting ❤❤❤❤❤❤

prickly 30.08.2020, 15:55:19

I love the story, but the English is a bit messed up. I don't think I will be able to read it this way. So please try using punctuation marks and try to write better, so people can understand.

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prickly 30.08.2020, 20:32:04

Melanie F, no need to stress yourself too much, just try to improve

Orji Christisna 30.08.2020, 15:12:18

No wonder Mr Harman allowed her to meet her mother so soon. This is serious

Sakina Walton 30.08.2020, 14:37:35

I think Mr Hamann set Ian up... when did he write the extra on the contract? he must've slipped it on there while she slept. he did eerily let her go spend the day with her mom like it wasn't a big deal.... good chapter

Gena Elgie 30.08.2020, 05:25:40

Love the book so far. I just wish you would upload more often or have longer chapters. If not I understand.

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Melanie F 30.08.2020, 13:10:09

Gena Elgie, I do my best to do it as often as possible. Thank you for the opportunity.

Kamlae 28.08.2020, 16:29:24

please update more chapters love the story

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Melanie F 30.08.2020, 13:09:19

Kamlae, update ready, thanks for reading.

Vaishnavi Pareek 28.08.2020, 08:55:49

please update

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Melanie F 30.08.2020, 13:09:13

Vaishnavi Pareek, update ready, thanks for reading.

Xana Warraich 27.08.2020, 15:58:35

So much mistake

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Melanie F 30.08.2020, 04:09:03

Sakina Walton, You are right, but I receive criticism in a good way, the truth is that my mother tongue is Spanish and I am not very fluent in English, so I get a little nervous because so many errors also discourage the reader.
I hope there are not so many to get to that point.

Orji Christisna 29.08.2020, 15:39:06

This is so interesting but I know it has not ended

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Melanie F 29.08.2020, 19:24:36

Orji Christisna, yes, it is still in process.

Inday Rojas 29.08.2020, 12:21:46

where is the ending of this story????

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Melanie F 29.08.2020, 19:22:43

Inday Rojas, it is a story in progress.

Maribel Oponda Cahiles 28.08.2020, 00:53:13

I like the story so much...

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Melanie F 28.08.2020, 03:29:21

Maribel Oponda Cahiles, Glad to know, thank you for reading me. ❤️❤️❤️

Branisteanu Palade Oana 27.08.2020, 23:06:18

Can't wait to read more, good job

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Melanie F 27.08.2020, 23:36:42

Branisteanu Palade Oana, Thanks you ❤️❤️❤️

Ayushi Gupta 27.08.2020, 06:15:09

update

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Melanie F 27.08.2020, 23:32:52

Ayushi Gupta, Ready!!

Carmen Huizar 27.08.2020, 00:23:52

Muy bien, me gustó mucho, solo separa más los párrafos.

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Melanie F 27.08.2020, 23:32:18

Carmen Huizar, Trabajaré en eso, gracias por leerme. ❤️❤️❤️

Gracie Ella leonard 23.08.2020, 12:06:12

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