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Wildflower (1)

Roza Csergo

Story about:mystery, adventure, forbidden love

Rating:
148
1259 458 64294

Ranking:
#3 in Fantasy
#93 in Romance


Complete 212 pages

Publication: 14.04.2020 — 02.09.2020


Description of book "Wildflower (1)"

Flower's life is not her own because of her lowly status. In Teknon, serfs are considered nothing more than assets, and everything they had belonged to their lord.

Her family works on the Sweetfield plantation and the arisen general is the new owner. The lord takes a liking at her, but the lady makes her life miserable.

While she tries to keep her parents from being eliminated, she gets involved in a plot to assassinate the King. To save herself, Flower takes advantage of the handsome investigator, Ike Fawn, and also the Lord General proves he's not that bad after all.

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Wisdom Abbah 22.09.2020, 19:43:32

The book is extra good, gives positive thoughts and make me fill i will make it.

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Roza Csergo 22.09.2020, 22:02:46

Wisdom Abbah, Thank you so much for reading. Please, give it a star to help reach more readers, and follow me for updates, discounts and promo codes.

noveltealover 17.09.2020, 04:20:00

I'm back to do a little bit of binge-reading! :) Just finished Part 25 now. After being introduced to Ike, I can say that I like him a lot already, at least more than the complicated General at the moment haha. It was interesting to learn that serfs are named after common objects or things. Does that mean Flower's parents and her ancestors were just named Flower or Wood if the women and men in her family were given that name respectively? Poor Flower and all the burden and hardship she and her parents are currently suffering. :'( So, I'm happy that she and Ike struck some kind of deal where they'll help each other out with him teaching her how to write/read along with doing some of her manual labour while she continues to hide him from the General and his men? (since I don't think this exchange will only last a single night haha). Can't wait to continue reading more! I think I'll read a bit each week so that way I can finish this story faster and start reading Thunder Tournament haha. So excited that you're going to be working on that story. Till next time! :)

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Roza Csergo 17.09.2020, 09:54:30

noveltealover, I am so happy to hear you continued reading the story. I hope you enjoy it. Wood are the men on her father's side and Flower are the women on her mother's side. And I hope you like the dynamic between the characters.

Ananya Chaudhuri 08.09.2020, 00:02:54

I also like General for Flower even though I know Ike is best for her

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Ananya Chaudhuri 16.09.2020, 13:29:47

Roza Csergo, I will for sure. And I will let you know aftet reading that story also.

Ananya Chaudhuri 08.09.2020, 00:39:45

What an ending!!! I AM SO HAPPY!

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Roza Csergo 15.09.2020, 23:37:57

Ananya Chaudhuri, Thank you kindly ❤️

Steve Ringer 13.09.2020, 13:52:43

Read this story in 2 days. All I can is wow. I enjoyed the build up and the ending was totally unexpected. Well done.

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Roza Csergo 15.09.2020, 11:07:54

Steve Ringer, Yaaaay. Thank you so much. Hope you'll come back to read the sequel, Nightshade as well.

Plume Alter 08.09.2020, 08:02:52

Been reading this book since yesterday. I'm on chapter 50!!! geez. I kept on imagining every scenario. Hahah. I'll continue reading laterrrrrr!!! Good job, Miss Author.

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Plume Alter 11.09.2020, 11:08:07

Roza Csergo, omg. I will not read the comments below because I don't want some spoilers hahahhaha.

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Ryo Francis 26.07.2020, 08:09:13

(1). Wildflower was in my library for months and when your book was chosen on book nook last week, I said to myself — i will read the first ten chapters. I ended up catching up with the author at chapter 109 — it was that good.
(2). Meltingbones, Teknon, Arisen, Midnight Torment, Blood Pearl — that's why i love fiction writing, we get to invent stuff and get creative.
(3). This is your best work so far. It was easy to read — more importantly, this is really fun to read. I also learned some new vocabulary as well.
(4). I was totally invested with your MC and I feel for her — great job.
(5). Chapter 59, Flower and her crazy idea. That was pure genius.
(6). Chapter 61 & 94, i didn't see them coming — hats off.
(7). Chapter 52, 53, 60, 105 common => come on / chapter 83 caughs => coughs / chapter 92 doomed to dye => die / chapter 98 you're not expandable => you're expendable / chapter 104 i don't want your pitty => pity
(8). During the start of the second act, I initially got a Mulan vibe to your story but as I read along I concluded — Wildflower is so much better.

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Roza Csergo 04.09.2020, 08:45:35

Ryo Francis, Thank you so much for reading my story. I'm so happy you read it all. And your comment means a lot. I'll definitely go back and make the ending better. Hope you enjoyed the story and you will come back to read the sequel too.

Angela Omozojie (Sky Angel) 03.09.2020, 23:53:00

Absolutely beautiful...and sad. I'm left heartbroken by Ike's death. You're an amazing author Roza. More wins for you.

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Angela Omozojie (Sky Angel) 04.09.2020, 00:59:33

Roza Csergo, Oh...I definitely will!

ELVI NDESHIHALA NANDE 02.09.2020, 21:51:45

thank you for this interesting story. it was really great and i have learned alot. i am so sad the prince has died but also happy because flower is in good hands. thanks once again

patiently waiting for book 2

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Roza Csergo 03.09.2020, 22:09:14

ELVI NDESHIHALA NANDE, That would make me really happy. Thank you ♥

Marilyn Lucero 29.08.2020, 20:50:41

What a mind-blowing climax! Such a surprising twist that I am not prepared for. I want Flower to wear the gold pin because nothing could change my love for the general, not even the fact of his previous marriages.
Yet, I'm glad Flower does many things for him in return, like testifying for his innocence. But no, the general would understand what's best for her, just as I do.

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AnnaRCase 02.09.2020, 23:29:33

Marilyn Lucero, Not even younger, just better. Less violent and brutal.

Marilyn Lucero 02.09.2020, 08:46:31

The author always amazes me with her own way of setting up the climax and ending her stories in unique ways. Since this is an open-ending, I am looking forward to Flower's new journey as a freeborn with the general.

Although I always wanted the general for flower, but I am hurting for Ike. All his life he was yearning for the favor of his father, even risking his life for it. Why is the king so crue l?

All the last events of the story just blew my mind, unpredictable scenes unfold after another. Every scene in the palace is well described, including the standards they uphold.

After reading the story until the end, I pause to think how the story runs, and I got endless surprises as I fully understand now the full meaning of those things and events I was confused at the start.

To sum it all, this book is a rare piece of art!

Keep writing, dear author, and may all the readers know how wonderfully you write all your stories.

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Marilyn Lucero 02.09.2020, 23:22:41

Roza Csergo, you are most welcome,

Sheeba Pratheesh 02.09.2020, 20:35:29

Does that mean General will get his true love in 2nd part and return of Ike. .Really I am hoping for it ........But it is Reader's POV

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Roza Csergo 02.09.2020, 21:10:38

Sheeba Pratheesh, Ike's departure was necessary to propell Flower's decisions in Book 2. Hope you will continue reading no matter the outcome.

Mary Lee 02.09.2020, 18:03:49

But whyyyyy???. Did Ike really have to die?

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Roza Csergo 02.09.2020, 18:47:40

Mary Lee, Ike's death is important for Flower's motivation in book 2

AnnaRCase 02.09.2020, 03:10:44

Roza! How could you!!! I just....

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AnnaRCase 02.09.2020, 17:39:34

AnnaRCase, Too soon to ask me that question Roza haha

Sheeba Pratheesh 02.09.2020, 15:08:53

Unfair to Ike and his true love .Why why why ....We have sorrows and pains ind real life ,but in stories too.......

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AnnaRCase 02.09.2020, 17:38:21

Sheeba Pratheesh, I don't like it either but life isn't always fair. Not everything is a happy ending. Maybe Flower gets hers, but not in the way she was expecting. Life hurts. Good people die young. Try and see the beauty in Ike's Ike's death, he saved her life and the generals. But in my mind the general has ways to go to be worthy of Flower. He needs to change his brutal ways. I wont forget the way he hacked those men apart which takes a high level of anger and violence. Without some big soul searching and redemption on his part, I don't want him with Flower. Maybe he won't be her love on the end anyway.

Sheeba Pratheesh 02.09.2020, 15:10:33

We don't want Ike's departure .I don't want to say the word death .......please author

Mary Lee 02.09.2020, 12:50:24

But whyyyyy?

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Roza Csergo 02.09.2020, 13:35:16

Mary Lee, Thank you so much for reading. His death will not be in vein and Flower's story will continue with a sequel. Psst. It's a secret. I haven't announced it yet.

AnnaRCase 02.09.2020, 04:05:53

I'm trying to talk myself down here. Like rationalize. It's not real. It's not real! Life is messy. And happy endings aren't always the way we imagined them. Burn that Castle to ash!!

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Roza Csergo 02.09.2020, 07:00:23

AnnaRCase, It was really hard to write the ending. I didn't sleep for 36hours for these 10 parts(first book special treatment), wrote a bunch of words, then cut them. At the last part, I had to take an hour to cry my eyes out. But I'll make it even more intense after I rest.

ELVI NDESHIHALA NANDE 31.08.2020, 12:21:47

i so love this book. now i am confused, i do not know whose good for flower between ike and shui. i cant wait for this part. thank you foe the interesting story

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Roza Csergo 31.08.2020, 12:31:42

ELVI NDESHIHALA NANDE, I'm so happy to hear you're enjoying the story. Thank you kindly for reading it. I'm now writing the ending and I hope you'll like it.

Marilyn Lucero 25.08.2020, 13:23:15

I'm crying! Take my heart with you, general.

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Roza Csergo 30.08.2020, 00:12:09

Roza Csergo, I'm so happy to hear your thoughts. I love Ike and Shui the same and I hope you will enjoy the ending. ♥

AnnaRCase 28.08.2020, 17:45:52

I'll work on that email I promise:)

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Roza Csergo 28.08.2020, 17:48:31

AnnaRCase, Thank you soo much. Any other thoughts you have regarding the storyline, characters or anything at all, please feel free to mention it.

NK Anuar 23.08.2020, 08:15:30

Vote for general

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Roza Csergo 23.08.2020, 11:09:44

NK Anuar, Under all that roughness, he's a great man. Thank you so much for reading. If you like the story please give it a star. ♥

Marilyn Lucero 22.08.2020, 11:25:46

OMG. what is your plan, general?

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Roza Csergo 23.08.2020, 11:07:41

Marilyn Lucero, He will be showing another good quality of his.

Marilyn Lucero 21.08.2020, 15:49:50

Whaaaaaaaaattttt???!!!

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Roza Csergo 21.08.2020, 16:18:16

Marilyn Lucero, Surprised by this plot twist?

IxoraRosada 17.08.2020, 23:22:25

You're a damn good writer. That's the tea, periodttt!

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Roza Csergo 17.08.2020, 23:36:56

IxoraRosada, Thank you so so much. I'm so blessed to have your support. ❤️

Marilyn Lucero 17.08.2020, 21:40:25

A loud round of applause for Flower. She played the part very well. This is such a beautiful chapter!

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Roza Csergo 17.08.2020, 23:35:22

Marilyn Lucero, Thank you so much for reading. Indeed, she handled it well, but stay tuned for more surprises.

Michaela Morgan 12.08.2020, 21:10:50

Great!

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Roza Csergo 12.08.2020, 21:53:13

Michaela Morgan, Thank you so much for reading. ♥

noveltealover 07.08.2020, 04:45:04

First of all, I'd like to say that the book cover is gorgeous! I love the artist's illustration of Flower on the cover. :) I didn't know how long the chapters/parts would be initially, particularly when it comes to fantasy aha, so I had planned to only read a couple this evening... I ended up reading up to Part 10 after being drawn in so easily to the world you've crafted and had to stop myself so I can leave a review haha. Maybe I'm biased because this genre is my cup of tea, but I'm already enjoying the story a lot and I've barely begun. I immediately liked Flower from the get-go. Poor Flower and her parents though for being born into the lowest caste in society. So, Serfs are even lower than servants it seems? And wow, Flower has a stomach of steel in handling all the blood and gore if she can clean up severed bodies without batting an eye. The General is already intriguing and I don't doubt that he's a multi-faceted person so I'm looking forward to seeing how these characters will develop! For an unedited story, this is fantastic & to be frank, I think it's quite rare to find stories of this calibre for free online. I can't wait to return & read more of this gem when I can. :)

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Roza Csergo 07.08.2020, 18:49:17

noveltealover, You're such a sweetheart. Thank you ♥

Marilyn Lucero 07.08.2020, 13:23:14

I hope the plan will succeed! And poor Praga, now you learn the lesson of forcing yourself to a loveless marriage.

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Roza Csergo 07.08.2020, 13:36:52

Marilyn Lucero, What goes around comes around, I guess.
We're about to transition into act three of the story and I'm so happy you're still following the updates. Thank you ❤

Sheeba Pratheesh 06.08.2020, 09:23:42

why why why no updates .................................

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Roza Csergo 06.08.2020, 19:55:35

Sheeba Pratheesh, Hi. Thank you so much for your patience. I just uploaded parts 113,114,115.
Enjoy reading.

Marilyn Lucero 30.07.2020, 08:06:08

Flower, fix your eyes to the prize you are aiming. One wrong move along the way could make the opportunity slip away.

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Roza Csergo 30.07.2020, 14:09:26

Marilyn Lucero, Living without making mistakes is not real life. We all have poor judgement sometimes. And that only makes us humans. Hope I managed to show Flower in a believable way.

Ananya Garg 27.07.2020, 18:13:30

this is interesting

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Roza Csergo 28.07.2020, 10:43:50

Ananya Garg, Thank you for reading. Hope you like the story.

Marilyn Lucero 27.07.2020, 01:38:32

Please continue this romantic moment. I am badly eager for the next!

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Marilyn Lucero 27.07.2020, 05:22:05

Roza Csergo, they will.:-)

Sheeba Pratheesh 24.07.2020, 11:48:46

Dear , you have promised for another chapter too

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Roza Csergo 27.07.2020, 00:20:22

Sheeba Pratheesh, I apologize. Please forgive me. I started the chapter but I was able to finish it only now. Parts 110 and 111 are published. Hope you read them soon.

Neneng Manao 24.07.2020, 21:50:24

I like your story ,just please don't keep me hanging.pls continue

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Roza Csergo 27.07.2020, 00:18:14

Neneng Manao, Thank you kindly for reading. I just published parts 110 and 111. Hope you enjoy it.

Marilyn Lucero 24.07.2020, 06:25:37

How sweet! I love this scene:-)

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Marilyn Lucero 24.07.2020, 15:06:54

Roza Csergo, I love the general

Angela Omozojie (Sky Angel) 23.07.2020, 18:21:25

yay! after so long, you finally updated

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Roza Csergo 23.07.2020, 19:02:33

Sky Angel, I'm sorry for the delay. We have terrible new neighbours, they fight all the time and I couldn't focus. Luckily, we found a new place and we will be moving soon. Thank you for bearing with me.

Sheeba Pratheesh 20.07.2020, 12:25:40

why why why no update dear ...............................

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Sheeba Pratheesh 23.07.2020, 16:55:31

Roza Csergo, Thank you dear

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Ananya Chaudhuri 14.07.2020, 00:04:02

Is Teknon and Arisen are made up places? Or they existed for real?

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Ananya Chaudhuri 15.07.2020, 00:56:17

Roza Csergo, Thank you so much for responding and clearing my doubt.

Marilyn Lucero 13.07.2020, 01:08:08

Poor Praga!

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Roza Csergo 14.07.2020, 01:07:50

Khushi Tiwari, Karma (wink-wink) I think she deserved it... Thank you so much for reading ♥

Khushi Tiwari 12.07.2020, 10:37:50

I believe in general's judgement wholeheartedly, and also I don't think there is any need to sympathize with his wife bcz she had also unreasonably destroyed flower's mother's life.

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Roza Csergo 12.07.2020, 13:47:05

Khushi Tiwari, Indeed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Everything will make sense soon.

Khushi Tiwari 11.07.2020, 07:18:00

It's becoming more nd more irresistible to wait for upcoming chapters plssss update

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Roza Csergo 12.07.2020, 13:45:09

Khushi Tiwari, Thank you so much. Your comments are so motivating.
I'll be updating again today evening. ❤

Marilyn Lucero 11.07.2020, 13:28:54

I don't like to hear the general hurting his wife physically.

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Roza Csergo 12.07.2020, 00:06:54

Marilyn Lucero, Thank you so much for reading ♥ the general has his reasons to be cruel.

Black Daisy 11.07.2020, 14:52:39

oh...I hope at least This would give the general some time to catch up...
I hope the general doesn't hurt his so called wife...but I'm guessing she knows something about what's been happening
he's giving her a little threat to shake her up, that's all!!

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Roza Csergo 12.07.2020, 00:04:34

Black Daisy, Thank you so much for reading ♥ I assure you, the general's actions are well calculated.

Marilyn Lucero 04.07.2020, 02:00:33

Sorry for being old-fashioned but I get thrilled whenever there is a scene between Flower and the general.

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Roza Csergo 11.07.2020, 12:58:31

Khushi Tiwari, I'm happy to see the General's supporters.

Sheeba Pratheesh 11.07.2020, 07:29:34

Update please

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Roza Csergo 11.07.2020, 12:56:46

Sheeba Pratheesh, Hi. I published parts 106&107. Please, forgive my delay, and thank you so much for your patience.

Marilyn Lucero 04.07.2020, 00:45:56

I love this chapter and I read with a smile despite the wild thuds of my heartbeats:-)

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Roza Csergo 04.07.2020, 14:54:40

Marilyn Lucero, Thanks for reading. Sorry for the short update... wish I could write as fast as you.

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