It takes a lot of guts for any amateur writer, to present her/his creativity to the whole world. I know some most amazing writers, who fear being judged, that's why they never publish their stories because a single negative is more powerful than hundreds of good and motivating comments.
Of course, the writer must possess the quality of being rejected and judged but the readers should also be a little thoughtful while writing any comment because the writer not only presents her creativity on the platter but herself.
I am not saying, not to raise your opinion and views but it's my humble request to all my readers and follower to be a little kind and thoughtful before writing a comment to any author (especially free story) because sometimes it sounds a little harsh and almost gives writer's block to the writer.
If you are not okay with the way the story progresses, you can always have the option to delete it from your library. Why hurt someone with your words? It's a different thing if you like doing that.
This blog post is not to offend anyone. Just like a reader has the right to raise his/ her views, writers too have that right :))