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Bar Mon’tblank —the Power of an Opportunity—

MarilynF

Series: APPEARANCES

Story about:romance urban chicklit fiction, boss and assistant, love triangle and turbulent past

Rating:
55
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Ranking:
#830 in Contemporary Romance
#124 in ChickLit


Complete 339 pages

Publication: 30.05.2020 — 03.02.2021


Description of book "Bar Mon’tblank —the Power of an Opportunity—"

Carlos is a mature man, arrogant, and very sure of himself.
Sara, an immature young girl, brave ... but very troublesome.

She is just a big inconvenience to him.
He is too overbearing and controlling for her.

What is the boundary between respect and tolerance?
To what extent can two people so different be able to support each other without mistreating each other?
Would you trade your ideals and convictions for someone you don't know and who you can't even trust?

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Cover design: Marilyn Faneite
Cover image: Pixabay/Steve Buissinne.

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speciostsa karanja
21.05.2021, 20:08:45

you will never fail to put a smile on my face with your work this book is great l lobed the storyline and the whole plot. so far so good l have now read three of your novels and l can tell you you are a great writer, inshallah from me speciostsa from Kenya.

MarilynF
21.05.2021, 18:39:19

speciostsa karanja, Thank you very much for your beautiful words. Thank you for your support ... A big hug and happy day.

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speciostsa karanja
21.05.2021, 01:38:38

interesting men with ego hahaha and since Sara is open why would she lie to Carlos and whats her story behind the marks l can already sense some unveiling mystery hehehe

MarilynF
21.05.2021, 12:20:58

speciostsa karanja, Soon you will find out friend ... ;)

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speciostsa karanja
20.05.2021, 22:52:30

I'm here again and since you suggested this novel well, I'm ready to be blown away. l will leave a comment in every chapter

MarilynF
20.05.2021, 21:24:59

speciostsa karanja, Welcome. I hope you like it but I accept all the suggestions, more if they are to improve :) Happy day

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Beata Gos
27.04.2021, 09:50:03

Great story, I had never controlled my tears from falling for the fate of Alex and Sara's ordeal

MarilynF
27.04.2021, 10:32:59

Beata Gos, Thank you very much for your support. That scene was one of the most difficult, both to write and correct ... I always ended up crying. It was very difficult to imagine the situation :'(
A big hug.

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Rizza Almonte Dela Cruz
12.04.2021, 09:35:04

I fall in love with these couples they are both great. How I wish it does not end there. I praise you writer for making a great story.

MarilynF
27.04.2021, 10:32:29

Rizza Almonte Dela Cruz, In My Lovely New Project ... you will know a "little bit" more about this pair. Carlos, Sara and of course I ... we thank you for so much support and we send you a big hug :)

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Jaya Krishna Kumar
12.03.2021, 12:18:57

The story was amazing Author the best part was the story was not confined to rich class but also touched some harsh realities of life faced and experienced by people which is heart-rending

MarilynF
16.03.2021, 23:52:22

Jaya Krishna Kumar, Hello Friend, it's good that you liked my story, the truth is that I always try to include a topic from real life in all my novels. Thank you very much for your support.

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Maria Ekanem
10.03.2021, 08:24:56

hope it have happy ending as I have met this twist

MarilynF
16.03.2021, 23:52:09

Maria Ekanem, Hello. I hope it has been to your liking. Thank you very much for your support.

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Maria Ekanem
08.03.2021, 14:40:53

A very interesting novel, love it so much

MarilynF
08.03.2021, 18:17:55

Maria Ekanem, Thank you for your support and beautiful words.

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MarilynF
24.12.2020, 06:47:32

Merry Christmas to all my dear readers. 2020 has been a very difficult year, but as I always say ... you have to try to see the positive side even at the atomic bomb ... So to raise those spirits and have a happy family time. A hug!

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MarilynF
09.12.2020, 17:02:44

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MarilynF
08.12.2020, 13:32:00

Today is a good day to start correcting this book, I hope I do not cause inconvenience to those who are reading it now ... by the way: Thank you very much for so much support, I love you.
Returning to the initial topic :)
I will correct several "finger error" that I have seen there, I hope I can solve most of them, although of course from experience, I know, that there will always be one that escapes.

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Chandler Blu
26.08.2020, 21:15:11

it's fantastic girl lots of love for the book ❤️❤️~Tanisha

MarilynF
26.08.2020, 22:52:55

Chandler Blu, Thank you very much! :*

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rita kumari
25.08.2020, 06:52:10

Mam , even if you won't... still....trust me when I say it was beyond the expectations!!! happiness , sadness , circumstances , and what not!!! The way you described everything just shows your devotion towards the story.... Believe me when I say I am going to nag all my friends to download BookNet and specially read the story!!! I congratulate you on your achievement of fulfilling up to our expectations...
With love ,
Anu

rita kumari
25.08.2020, 15:49:08

MarilynF, it was so nice to know my words brought a smile on your face.,;)

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Naomie
21.08.2020, 23:12:36

Nice story.Love the ending

Naomie
22.08.2020, 10:27:30

MarilynF, Thanks

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Akriti Dangwal
22.08.2020, 11:30:34

lovely story I love it sooo much♥️

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Akriti Dangwal
21.08.2020, 19:38:07

nic story

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Akriti Dangwal
22.08.2020, 05:55:56

MarilynF, okay

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Onoriode Akaba
25.07.2020, 20:54:47

Well done for this chapter, loved it

Onoriode Akaba
21.08.2020, 23:18:12

MarilynF, Great! I can't wait

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Leslie Villablanca Herrera
21.08.2020, 08:48:22

thank you author for this wonderful story....so whats next???

MarilynF
21.08.2020, 14:30:51

Leslie Villablanca Herrera, Hi thanks!
Friend visits the chapters of 'my new projects' and 'my thanks', there I left information about my new stories. Happy day!

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Scarlet Rojo
18.08.2020, 16:43:54

Beautiful final chapter. I loved. if it was time for Carlos and Sara to have their erotic scene.
when will you upload the epilogue?
what happened to Brian?

MarilynF
19.08.2020, 18:25:08

Scarlet Rojo, Hi. Yes, it was just and necessary that that pair of lovebirds finally had their pajama party
:))

The Epilogue I will be uploading tomorrow Thursday 20, I will try to upload it before noon. In conjunction with the Epilogue, I will upload additional information about my upcoming stories and I hope my dear readers can continue to support me as much as they did with Bar Mon'tblank.

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Grasya Bontuyan
16.08.2020, 01:41:27

Beatiful story, i cried so much and run out of tears. It deeply touch me. Thank you for sharing

MarilynF
16.08.2020, 22:01:53

Grasya Bontuyan, Thank you for allowing me to take up a little of your precious time. Thank you for your support and beautiful words. My new projects very soon. A big hug.

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Grasya Bontuyan
16.08.2020, 01:41:26

Beatiful story, i cried so much and run out of tears. It deeply touch me. Thank you for sharing

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Scarlet Rojo
04.08.2020, 16:55:22

It is as if Sara was in love with his stepbrother?

MarilynF
08.08.2020, 20:01:46

Scarlet Rojo, No, she is not in love with her foster brother. It's just that Alex is one of the few people that she can count as family. It is not my case, because I have family "even to export" but it must be very sad to go through life so lonely, so for that reason, Sara clings too much to her memory, to the security that what has already known provides.

The same thing happened with Brian, the blond man managed to sneak into Sara's life because, in a way, she saw a friend in him ... someone who took her into account, someone to talk to and especially someone who it brightened the day, even when she just wanted to cry ... though in the end, misunderstandings and traumatic memories played a bad trick on both of them.
Thank you for your support Scarlet.
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Gracie Ella leonard
01.08.2020, 06:40:31

Nice story dear❤. Please follow me back and like my new book titled the blessing in disguise or add up in your library for future updates, thanks❤❤.

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Scarlet Rojo
31.07.2020, 01:35:28

Hi. I really love this novel.
I hope can read it completely.
Are you planning to subscribe?

MarilynF
30.07.2020, 23:52:53

Scarlet Rojo, Hello, I am very happy when my work pleases my readers, that is the biggest boost I can receive to continue striving to create more and better stories. Bar Mon'tblank is free and will continue until the end of the story ... Thank you very much.

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Onoriode Akaba
22.07.2020, 04:01:06

I love this chapter

MarilynF
22.07.2020, 11:40:59

Onoriode Akaba, It is an honor to be able to please my readers with my stories ... Thank you very much for the support.
: *

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Feggy Christopher
18.07.2020, 00:13:27

i can't wait for what happened next..thanks for updating

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Feggy Christopher
11.07.2020, 17:31:08

Thanks for the update, great chapter

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Feggy Christopher
09.07.2020, 22:52:54

Happy Birthday Dear

MarilynF
09.07.2020, 20:46:01

Thanks for so much support, Feggy :)

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Leslie Villablanca Herrera
10.07.2020, 01:50:36

happiest birthday
thank you for the wonderful story hope to read some pages to end for free
God bless

MarilynF
10.07.2020, 14:48:14

Leslie Villablanca Herrera, Amen and thank you very much for the support :)
Yes, this story will be free for a while, after it's finished.

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Feggy Christopher
30.06.2020, 00:20:46

Thanks for the Update

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Feggy Christopher
26.06.2020, 03:17:20

great chapter
Thanks for updating
hope everything is good and settled now

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ee316708600556fd
25.06.2020, 18:05:36

thanks for the update.. the book is great

MarilynF
25.06.2020, 21:27:34

ee316708600556fd, Thanks :)

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Feggy Christopher
23.06.2020, 16:47:08

Thanks for updating

MarilynF
24.06.2020, 00:42:35

Feggy Christopher, Thanks

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Black Daisy
12.06.2020, 15:20:54

ohh.... I can't wait for what happened next...

MarilynF
12.06.2020, 14:34:19

Black Daisy, I promise you that there will be some longer chapters ... I have been translating almost on the fly, at the time of publishing.

But I already advanced a little more, so I promise that the next one will be long and interesting

hahahaha .. that sounded a bit weird

Anyway ... Do not despair.

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Black Daisy
12.06.2020, 15:09:14

nice one

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Feggy Christopher
11.06.2020, 01:27:52

awwwww so beautiful you dedicate this chapter to both of us. I'm loving how things are beginning to unfold between carlos and Sara. though the chapter is short, Thanks for updating. expecting more updates soon.

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Feggy Christopher
09.06.2020, 22:34:54

interesting
but i have this feeling that Carlos will fall in love with Sara.

MarilynF
09.06.2020, 21:09:01

Feggy Christopher, There is a step from hate to love ... but also backwards.

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Abigail Amankwah
03.06.2020, 00:31:21

Pls can the pages be updated a little faster n it should be a lot n not one by one cuz I'm enjoying the novel n I don't want to keep waiting

MarilynF
03.06.2020, 15:34:51

Abigail Amankwah, Thanks. :)

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