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#244 in Contemporary fiction
#641 in Contemporary Romance
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173 pages
15.05.2021 — 02.07.2021
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Log inDo tell us if conduct any giveaway!lovely one, nice story
Sayba Naznin Riya, Thank you very much, will announce when it will be made.
Wow!!!
Another amazing book....Katrina and Michael finally have a happy ending...
And Luke and aurora it was an amazing twist..
I'm a big fan of ur writing...
Can't wait for another books from u...
O.J Ebubeoha, Okay..I'll wait till then..
Very interesting story...
Lifes of Katrina and Michael are too complicated...
Is there a third person who wants Katrina's downfall???
Or is it Eric???
Many mysteries is yet to unfold..
Let's wait for further updates....
Syeda Noorah, Thank you very much... Means a lot to me... My heart is filled with pride for the amazing family I am surrounded by.
Katrina is wise but it's feel as if she can s digging her own grave
O.J Ebubeoha, thats true also ...I hope she wins
How old is Michael Kane?
Risper wanja, Michael is thirty years of age, while Katrina is forty five years of age. I hinted it in chapter three and four. It's also in the description dear.
finally some conclusion on Michael life with Meredith
Dhruty Mody, Yea dear.... He never truly loved her anyway, he was only filled with the need to do his duty and honor her. Also actions have consequences. Things might have turned out differently if she had told him.
you writing is of another level.....I really love your lamguage
Risper wanja, Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words.
The conversation between Edith and Luke was downright and honest.
Jojo, Thanks dear, I had to make sure the right emotions were conveyed by both parties. Not easy to do but am glad I nailed it.
nice chapter
Dhruty Mody, Thanks Mody... Appreciate...
excellent
Dhruty Mody, Lol... Thanks
truth is always bitter...
Dhruty Mody, It sure is. But it is much preferred to lying and deceit, even when one means well or is scared of another's reaction to certain truths
what a twist???
Dhruty Mody, Absolutely... There I still more to come
so someone else is also behind her to snatch her company
Dhruty Mody, The story has no leads yet just pawns.. I am just playing the game till we have all our cards and aces.
Quite interesting
Debbie Asan, Thank you Debbie.. I wanted something different for a change.. Funny and iconic.. Thanks for your comment. I hope to deliver.
Michael didn't discuss with Katrina this proposal before...so bossy ma'am will show her bossyness
Dhruty Mody, We will find out tomorrow.. Hopefully.. Thank you for your honest comments.
who is traitor between Maggie and Clara???
Dhruty Mody, Am will unfold as the story progresses. Depends on how their characters play out.
Hi writer!
This is just a suggestion depends on what you agree on tho.
you should try to at least write a 2 chapters per day to keep up with the pace of we readers.!
This one chapter per day really discourages us we might want to neglect the story or you might actually start making the chapters longer so the intensity and energy keeps going.
You should either try one if these two.
More grease to your elbow dear
Sa Ge I, Thank you immensely for your suggestion. This is a new story for me and I didn't have all the parts planned out. I will try the two chapters to keep up dear, although maybe not every day, but I will try to work in tandem with the needs of my readers.
that's good research
why do I feel that Michael's fiancee isn't pregnant with his baby but the baby is of someone else
IshkbaazSHIVIKA, There could be a high probably of that... The whole leave and come back later with, I am pregnant thing is kind of skeptical and suspicious. Who knows, we just have to find out much later.. Anything can happen .. Secrets aren't kept forever.
nice one
Dhruty Mody, Thank you very much.
Karina husband is the boss
Dhruty Mody, Maybe, Maybe not. We just have to find out.
nice chapter
Dhruty Mody, Thank you very much.. More update soon
I like it ...well done
O.J Ebubeoha, am waiting
a very unique and catchy storyline
NasheMel, Thank you very much.. This is my first try at something like this, I hope not to screw up
you have got a good story line
Kriya Kashyap, Thank you very much. Am hoping it fans out well
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