Description of book "My Mate's Second Chance"
Marked and married to his Mate, Daniel believed that he found his happy ending but little did he know that the Moon Goddess had other plans for his fated one.
Daniel turns around the corner and into the dark alley only to find the male he was stalking, his mate, in the arms of another. The werewolf Beta feels his blood boil as he watches Luke kissing another man. In an instant, he had strode forth and ripped his mate out of the arms of the other and punched the unwanted lover, making him stagger back.
"Daniel!", Luke shouted before covering his own mouth, "Wait...I can explain!"
The Beta turned to see his mate with slight panic in his eyes as he shouted, "Luke! Run!!" With that he let out a hiss as silver blade pierced his side.
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Log ini want to know what happened to Collen and that witch.i don't remember correctly did Logan say he is dead if yes then how. Logan didn't treat the person right who loved him dearly. now he tried to snatch love from the other. I'm still not convinced about Luke. he already accepted Logan without Daniel's knowledge and was keeping him in the dark and lied nonstop. on the other hand Logan tried to remove Daniel from the picture by branding him. Luke didn't care about it once. he marked him because he didn't want to leave him on the first place. he didn't think about Daniel's feelings, his pain. it's clear that he only feels grateful towards him. if he loved him he didn't do any of this.remember how he treated king Aiden for his efforts beware of the fact that he was using him. but did he treat Daniel better than him, like his mate for lifetime, no. i have more to say but can't say in one time.
Eli Blake, yes thank. i think Collen died to protecting the witch.
nice chapter. Collen seems like a good guy. he loved him unconditionally. but as usual he left him as Collen said. because he is a jerk. He also lied to Luke about Collen that he was just a friend. he took Collen's love for granted.
Neha Garg, Technically...they were not lovers because Logan never let them cross that threshold...for different reasons. I didn't mention it in this book because it's not about Logan and Collen but hunters aren't supposed to have homosexual relationships. They are supposed to breed as duty (mentioned in Logan's vampire story). Collen didn't care but Logan was growing stronger fast and left Collen only to return as a hybrid. Once again, they couldn't be together because Hunters can only be with hunters or humans. Logan refused to accept his love this time for Collen's sake. He felt it was Collen's time to grow and shine as a hunter.
he is actually messed up just like Logan. made for each other. i feel sorry for what he had gone through. that's why he was dedicated to Aiden. but Aiden also used him.
Neha Garg, True, Luke is really messed up character that many times it's hard to write and explain what he does and feels. He doesn't care about the person's intentions as long as they 'love' him.
Logan is such a cunning person. he knows Daniel can see them still he is showing his possession to Luke. so Daniel could feel heartbroken again.
Eli Blake, ohh yes. i was quite busy.
Thanks for update author !
Chantel Abrahamse, Thanks for the comment ^-^ Enjoy
Omg I just fell a bit in love with Logan. Finally seeing him act out that he hates wolves. And then the vulnerability he shows in the end. I love it. Well written, Eli
Bille, Ooo! I wonder which chapter you're talking about though... Is it where he leaves Luke and Dan in alley?
I didn’t see that coming. Luke being calculated like that.
Bille, Hmm, he does want Dan back at all cost...
Mmm. I loved where Logan said he’s very possessive. I wish there was more from Logan’s pov on how he felt when he realized he was mated with a werewolf
Bille, I too loved that scenee ^-^
And thanks Eli for having made this chapter about Logan’s struggles. I wished I’d seen more of him being mad and confused about having a mate since he’s not a werewolf. I wish I’d seen him in denial for a while. But I guess the bond is just so strong there’s no room for denial.
Bille, I wanted to give more of Logan's perspective but I had already written same scene frok 2 POV and I didn't want to bore the readers. I can still try to add that scene later in book ^-^
And his thirst. I know
Omg! I know what’s going on!!!!!!
Logan calls Luke for Danuke. It must be because he accepts Daniel in a way, right?
I’d still very much like to hear more about the struggles Logan must feel and the surprise when he realizes he has a mate! And a werewolf at that!!!
Also. Wouldn’t Daniel be able to smell Logan on Luke after their very first kiss?
Ahhhh. Cool
I got confused again. Reading Luke’s pov. It seemed to me he was with Daniel and there’d just been that crash of cars.
But suddenly he’s on the lap of Logan??? How did he get there? And why didn’t you tell us some details about that. I’d also have loved to get Logan’s POV. When did he feel the pull? How does he feel about it? Maybe that comes though….
Bille, Luke's POV was a speed up so that Readers don't have to read through the stuff all over again. You all know what happened after Luke pulled Dan from car crash, it's there in Dan's POV so I did a time skip but tried making it movie style, quick mush
Hmmmm. I’m not much for fighting-scenes. You have a great and captivating writing style, but I can’t help but find it boring and something to get over with do we can get to the good parts again….
But I’m impressed at how vivid you make the scene seem. I can totally see the places in my mind.
Question though: why does Luke’s second mate smell like mud?
Ahh. He likes the smell of mud. Now it makes better sense. Haha
I got confused when Daniel is in the living room thinking that Luke would rather be with HIM.
Do you mean someone from book one or do you mean the guy that Daniel assumes has given Luke those hickeys?
I don’t like Luke. He lies too much. Grr
Bille, Yes, the guy who gave Luke hickeys. There is no old love interest for Luke
Amazing author i love it can't wait for next update!
Chantel Abrahamse, Aww, thank you so much for the comment! I'm working on the update ^-^
Omg! Why is Luke like that? How could he blame Daniel for being like the rogues?! That’s the worst he could do to him. That’s a low blow
Bille, Well, perhaps he didn't want Daniel to learn about something? 0-0
You keep me on the edge of the seat every time you twist and turn like that.
Why is Luke Wet? Whose clothes is that? A hotel? He was out so late!
Bille, Awww, thank youuu! I love keeping things interesting ^-^
they are in this mess because of Logan. what he would say for himself when he sucked life out of Luke. such a hypocrite is he. from the start he wanted them in such position so that he could get a chance. he wants their break up. tell me one thing if he would have been on Danny's place what would his actions be. " ohh my dear mate I'm so happy that you find another mate. go live happily with him and i will die in my missery". at least Danny did not try to kill his mate. even if it was not his intentions. at this point i want to snap Logan's neck. please author put me somewhere in your story and i will do the deed.
Neha Garg, Awww, thank you so much. Glad I could make you happy ^-^
Wow. This got exciting. ….! Revealing he’s a werewolf in the city. But what made Luke standing there in the first place ??
Bille, I'm glad I got hooked to the book ^-^ And your questions will soon be answered ^-^
Omg. I loved the scene with Luke tying Daniels tie. There are so many funny things in it! ❤️
Bille, Awww, thank youu! And welcome to the book
hi author. chapter was amazing. Danny was harsh but I will not say he is wrong. he is heartbroken and angry. Luke never gave him the chance to keep his sanity after meeting Logan. Luke's constant lying took a great part in this. he was also hurt when Luke accused him of abuse. still Daniel tried to be sane and kept consoling Danny for the sake of his mate. but when they completed their bond Danny lost his cool and tried to be happy with his chosen one but because of the hunters she and his unborn baby died too. what is he suppose to do?? they always cared for Luke and respected his feelings. that's why he is more angry. and Logan was wrong from the start. i can understand he wanted his mate's attention but he chose the wrong way.
Eli Blake, hmmm. eagerly waiting for next update
i was trying to have sympathy for Logan but...not happening now
and I'm again back to square with Luke. what right do they have to complain about Dan's cheating. what are they both doing from the start?? just cheating. Logan is just a bastard and selfish cheater. he said that about the she-wolf so that Luke will be hurt and would push Daniel away and he will have a chance. and how can Luke do this to Daniel. Luke marked Logan and even slept with him so many times. At that time did he consider Daniel's feelings?? after learning the truth about Logan, did he push Logan away, but he pushed Daniel. he felt a pang hearing about she-wolf's pregnancy but did he realise what type of pain Daniel has to go through of his betrayal.and now he again bend to Logan just heard after she-wolf.he is such a hypocrite. whatever Danny did Luke deserved that. Danny was heartbroken. he did whatever he could to get over it. Daniel should not feel guilty. he should remind Luke his deeds. my poor Daniel does deserve lots of love.
Neha Garg, No no, I didn't find your response harsh but in fact I found it really interesting and helpful. It's good to have someone tell me how the story is being represented. ^-^ Hmm, I actually had Luke's reaction in mind but only now that you brought it up that I realize I forgot to put it in... This is what happens when I can't write in 1 sitting, half of my ideas get forgotten. I'll try to adjust it in somewhere.
omg author. did you remember i once mentioned that i think Daniel is Luke's second chance and Logan is his first chance.
Eli Blake, i have prediction power that is related to past secrets. hehehehe
nice chapter author. I'm glad somehow i was right about Logan. and i hope this pup is Danial's.
Neha Garg, A very happy New Year to you as well ^-^
i feel bad for Luke for what he had gone through. i never judge him for his past but for the choices he made and things he did to Daniel after coming to their honeymoon. there are so many things that tell how differently he treats Logan than Daniel. and why his belly is growing. is he pregnant. Poor Daniel. he has to endure it too that his former mate is pregnant with another. i called Luke former because he marked another already. what a shitty fate Daniel has. i really don't want to feel disappointed in the end.
Neha Garg, Your words made my day. I'm doing well now and hope you are as well. For the free copy of Alpha's Mate Doesn't Know, please dm me on Instagram (I hope you have kindle app). The book might get updated again in the future but if you have a copy, you can update it anytime for free by going in settings. Also, the update is out ^-^
About Luke not being interested in saving Daniel, I'll work on it as well, thank you for letting me know. My Instagram is in my Bio
It is really hard to read. When you keep stating you are going thru a hard time. Well, to be blunt about this!! Every one is going thru a hard time!! Please stop saying that. I got it when I read the last so many chapters. Please!! So, for the book so far is okay.
Eli Blake, It is not harsh words. It is the truth. I you can't find the joy in writing it. Than that should your clue to try something else. Life is not easy. You can't please every one. I don't have time to make a commet after each chapter. Because I listen while I am working at work. I do commit when I am not working.
Danny is tired of being selfless every time. first his birth right was snatched, then other responsibilities, he has to leave his pack for his mate and now the brutal heartbreak. i see no wrong in what he is doing now. he is doing this for both of them. he needs to survive the heartbreak. he also has the right to live his life happily but he got nothing other than pain. now he wants to control and live on his terms. and the chapter was very short author.
Neha Garg, I'll try my best ^-^
am liking this:)
Eli Blake, thnx:)
ouch..that hurt!
Rashi Sahlot, Doesn't every betrayal hurt? T-T
well-done author Luke deserves this. sorry if I'm too harsh but i think it's his second nature now. like a slut he wants to be handled roughly. why didn't he throw that sentence on Logan he threw on Daniel that you are just like those rogues. he is such a hypocrite. he took Daniel's love for granted.
Neha Garg, That is all true and I definitely understand every single point you said. Now, your opinion is really important because all these objections you have, I was supposed to clear them and reveal the truth as well. Your continuous comments keep my story in check. I can assure you though that every thing has a reason behind it.
thanks author for your kind words. but i always appreciate good work. i didn't complete reading this chapter but want to say has he made himself a hybrid or something. because how his claws change after taking the pill and about that red pill, i guess it's made of blood or something to give him a vampire effect. or he is a natural hybrid. I'm not a warewolf expert hehehehe. but just a wild guess. my second guess is he takes the pills to suppress the process. anything can be possible.
Neha Garg, Thank you so much for sharing your theories with me and I want to tell, you're quite spot on! You'll see how much of it is correct soon ^-^ And I appreciate you taking out time to write comments.
thrilling chapter. nice one author. thanks
Neha Garg, Thank youu ^-^ Do you have any theories? Regarding Logan or the pills?
my poor Daniel and Danny. they have to endure so much. it's 1:28 am and I'm crying while reading this chapter heartbreak. he did nothing wrong while still paying. all his life he was selfless but what he got was a brutal heartbreak in the end. i don't want him to die.
Neha Garg, Awww, I'm sorry dear. I do understand your point though. Unfortunately there's a struggle written in his life but by the end, it will all make sense. Everything that happened, happened for a good reason
i think that shewolf will sacrifice her life for him when time comes. please author update soon can't wait.
sometimes i think Daniel is Luke's not first but second like how he didn't respect his feelings earlier.
Neha Garg, I understand your point and theories. Of course, I have 80% of the storyline figured out and planned in advance but the remaining 20% is always for the readers. I will try to shape it so it satisfies you more as much as possible. I'm already paying attention on some keys and you might notice in chapter 24
haa what a relief. thanks
Neha Garg, two continuous updates as promised and hopefully two more. Enjoy ^-^
that she wolf is better than Luke. she knows how to be affectionate to someone. one gesture from him and she stood by his side unlike someone who wants to be with him only because he is going to die and get it done with it as soon as possible. He doesn't even accuse or hold Logan accountable for Daniel's condition instead he is writhing in pleasure under him. he is actually an excuse of a pathetic mate.
Neha Garg, I agree with your words but just think for one moment...if Luke is to fight Logan instead, how would he convince the hunter to help? Doesn't by giving Logan what he wants a better way to convince him?
hey author please don't make Logan Daniel's mate too. i wouldn't like it.
Neha Garg, Don't worry. Logan isn't Daniel's mate. The story is twisted enough without it.
hey author why are you not updating. have you abandoned the book. please don't do this. this book is very interesting. please update.
Neha Garg, Hey, I apologize deeply for disappearing like that. There were some real life issues that I was facing but now that I'm back, I would make up for it with a few continuous updates
please author update soon.its been a long time
why pretend to care about him if you choose your second over him. it's like you already set your mind that he is going to die. he was right you replaced him so easily. you don't deserve his love.
Eli Blake, yeh sure
i read till chapter 14 and now i want Daniel to be alive and healthy and he should reject Luke because he is not worth his love and respect. Luke should regret his decision in the future.
Neha Garg, I'm going to try my best to update regularly. I'm going to be honest, I felt this book is dead and didn't had the motivation to carry on. Thank you so much for encouraging me with your kind words ^-^
wow his first mate is dying somewhere and he is having fun. such a slut. i'm not interested in their intimacy so I'm skipping. it disgusts me.
Neha Garg, Yeah, it was a hard choice to place it there but after giving a LOT (like...A LOT LOT) of spoilers, I had them vote if there should be an intimate scene here or not and apparently they thought there should be one here.
yeh keep hurting him like this Logan he deserves this only. the one who loved him wholeheartedly he kicked his feelings for you.
Neha Garg, Oh my... I feel like Luke will have to do a lot to earn back your favor... *pushes Luke* "GET TO WORK!!"
Logan showed his true colours
Neha Garg, Yup, he is a hunter after all. What can be expected from him?
Luke deserves this monster only. he will realise in future what a grave mistake he did
Neha Garg, So Logan is a monster in your opinion?
no Luke you lied. If you loved him you would have never cheated on him. if you loved him you would have rejected Logan but no you were enjoying his kisses and touches and if confronted you were snapping on Daniel. you didn't let him touch you. Even you blame him for forcing you.
Neha Garg, So true
wow Luke now you found your second chance so you are comparing him with rouges now brilliant.
Neha Garg, Yeah, not going to lie, that Rogue line was kinda harsh... It broke our sweet Dan.... T-T
shame on you Luke. he did so much for you but you are betraying him like this. i hope you regret enough in the future.
Neha Garg, That is kind of true. Dan stood for Luke against till the end. In Alpha's Mate Doesn't Know, Dan gave away his title as Beta and stayed in dungeon for Luke.. T-T
please don't leave this book. i read Keyden and Olivia's book also. i want to read about Daniel and Luke too. you are doing great. keep it up.
Neha Garg, Hahaha! Okay, I heard you. I won't give a proper answer to it though to avoid spoilers ^-^ But things are gonna happen! Would you like them..? We'll seeee~
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