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#96 in Erotic/Sexual Fantasy
#504 in Romantic erotica
On Hold: 28 Apr
28 pages
10.04.2021 — ...
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Stephanie Morales, Thank you. I will try that you will like the next update more :)
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:s thanks for the update!
LisaTerence, don't be so unhappy even if it's little I kind of know how hard can be keep writing something that it's coming out of your own mind. :)
so I really feel glad with the update :)
Ahh! How do you manage to make me jump out off my place? I mean I'm now more impatient to read more! :s
I'm on the "what is going to happen now?" .
I was reading another story these days 'cause if not I'll collapse from the waiting haha so I became so fed up that I almost forgot but no, I'm here 'cause when something caches my interest I'm on it all the time 'till I'm full of it :).
gracias for the update.
LisaTerence, don't worry I understand you I'll wait for the updates patiently when a book catches my attention I'm on the wait 'till the end :) I'll manage
Hi! it's me again :D I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Now I want more! I'll crave for what will happen next!
I will not make any rushed comments 'cause this it's looking really different from the first and it's more like a plot twist than a other version :s well I wanted Anne to suffer a little more :D don't get me wrong it's just that I'm so feed up by the tragedy tag that I wish more crudeness but with a spark of innocence :s
IDK if he'll find her but I'm looking forward for what's next to come.
thanks for bringing this chapter!
Valeria Perez Estudillo, Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me
I'm loving this new version although the first was a good one just needed a little bit of less rushiness and development but it was good.
In contrast I loved the personality of the first Henry, he was somehow vulnerable naive and in his way a caring person, and this is a tyrant and I had have enough of tyrants ML they are good but their personalities are so predictable that tents to get bored :) and in my opinion what makes something good it's it's originality. :) I'll keep reading 'cause besides the changes that have the story I'll love to see how things go :)
Valeria Perez Estudillo, Thank you for your comment. It encourages me more.
I really like this new plot twist of "escaping" in the story bcuz usually in most of the books; when a girl gets kidnapped, she's shown such vulnerable that she can't even escape her captor ONCE (which has become quite boring). But, I really didn’t see that coming though. Now, let the aSsHoLe suffer a li'l for raping her mercilessly. Loadzz of LovE from my side $ continue writing in Ur own way!! KEEP IT UP!!!!!.....
Kaberi Sengupta, :D
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