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#278 in Short stories
#824 in Contemporary Romance
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64 pages
04.02.2021 — 05.02.2021
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Log inThanks for the reads. Always appreciated.
I enjoyed this story it keep me wanting to know what's next .Good work
Eva Sankar, Hi Eva, thank you very much for the feedback. I highly appreciate it, it's truly an encouragement for me to keep writing.
short story but very interesting. love it. Thank you for writing a wonderful storyline.
Josie joe, Thank you for your support and reading my story. Next month I have a new story coming out and it's longer. I also have a developing one currently live.... Tx
what happened to migraine and test reports ? am I missing anything ?
ruk p, Hi Ruk. Thanks very much for reading. It wasn't anything fatal, the migraines were caused by all the stress. I should have made a follow up and mentioned that. Thank you.
Wow, a very nice love story, you are a good writer. Congratulations ????? hope to read more your books for FREE. Take care and God bless us
Lynn Austria, Thank you Lynn. I have another developing story and it's free, 'Love of a prince'. You can follow me so that you get updates of all my stories and updates on chapters and everything. Thanks for the support.
The best present for Lorenzo! :)
I like it. ))
Tlalane Manciya, Not yet. Fortunately, I have several chapters ahead. :)
I’m on the 8th chapter now.
The first chapters are very catching! I like how the headache was described, I easily visualized everything. The kiss was great! The main characters are very sweet. I wonder if Lorenzo married after all (I have read only 5 chapters yet)), but I'm very curious what will happen next. Especially what was in the pictures? :)
The fifth chapter is hard to read because of the italics. It's better to write at the beginning about the time and make normal fonts. :)
The story is engaging. I want to read it till the end.
Thank you!
PS I've just read the annotation for the third time, but the first after reading part of the story. )) Now I can imagine what will be next. But still curious to find out the secret. :)
Наталия Арчер, Thank you... I will consider the italics as I see a lot of people are having issues reading it. Thank you so much for your support.
I like the cover (the man on the cover mostly, hard to evaluate the fonts, he keeps distracting me))), and the annotation. Must be very interesting. Can't wait to start reading it. :)
Наталия Арчер, Thanks for the feedback. Truly appreciate it.
Wow!
Lola Quentoxera, Thank you...
I really love the synopsis... Congratulations on your book
Omolola Talabi, Omolola Talabi, Thank you ?.
Thank you guys for reading. ❤️ I highly appreciate it.
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