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uncontrollable

Sage Greg

Story about:tragedy, lust, blood

Rating:
6
104 32 5052

Ranking:
#437 in Others
#396 in Short stories


Complete 28 pages

Publication: 22.12.2018 — 14.01.2019


Description of book "uncontrollable "

Uncontrollable is a short story about a girl who is named Bridgette Henderson, she is a very gorgeous woman at the age of 21 and she has a secret, A very dark secret that no one knows, except Hector Vincent, Hector is in love with Bridgette and turns a blind eye to her dark side and deep down hopes to be with her but knows its impossible.
And then there Duke Harrell the gorgeous popular doctor that steals Bridgettes heart for a little while and loses his own.
The story is a mixture of a messed up love story(not really love story) that doesn't end in a happy ever after.
I hope you enjoy it and give me some feed back on what you think. I'd appreciate it :)

Also DISCLAIMER : The book may contain some scenes that might be uncomfortable to the reader

Comments on book:

Total number of threads: 18

Heather Navy 16.01.2019, 15:45:43

too impressed

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:38:46

Heather Navy, I'm glad, thanks

Jeanette Adams 20.01.2019, 14:28:15

sometimes it is a little bit uncomfortable to read:)

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Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:38:28

Jeanette Adams, hehe yeah...my bad..

Kerry Ward 21.01.2019, 13:53:42

wow, it is awesome

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:38:05

Kerry Ward, thank you! I'm glad you liked it

Ana Arrigo 23.01.2019, 15:17:50

fantastic

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Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:37:45

Ana Arrigo, thanks!

Rashi Sharma 06.05.2019, 19:17:03

This book, I must say, clinged me to carry on reading until completed it!
I am in really love with this story.
A really good fiction.
Keep it up!

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:37:13

Rashi Sharma, aww thanks
I will try my best!

Mwanaidi Said 09.07.2019, 15:53:12

I loved the story, I just wished Hector could save or cure her and they could live a happy life as the girl didn't want to kill... (just in my thoughts) ;)

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:36:40

Mwanaidi Said, I'm glad you did.
I actually had thought of that but In the end the story wrote itself if that makes sense. btw thanks for the comment

Annalyn Fernandez 10.04.2020, 23:12:00

This book is good. It shows how life is sometimes too hard for someone to endure pains in life. Hope to read more stories from you .

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:34:39

Annalyn Fernandez, thank you, I am glad you liked it. I will try to reach your expectations :D

Enigma 23.05.2020, 12:56:59

It's uncontrollable to stop me from falling in love with this fantastic piece of art. It's just awesome. I really liked it a lot.

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:33:13

Enigma, aww thanks!

Ryo Francis 07.06.2020, 04:57:08

(1). Love the short chapters, but your paragraphs are way too long making your story so much harder to read
(2). Your tragic story has a great message :)

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 28.07.2020, 16:32:48

Ryo Francis, thanks!
I see, I will keep that in mind and do something about it.
I appreciate your comment

ESTHER OKEKE 08.04.2019, 19:01:41

critically

True Match 17.01.2019, 19:34:35

oh no

Jenny 13.01.2019, 15:38:34

it is really impressive, provokes many feelings

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 14.01.2019, 11:37:21

Jenny, I'm glad. Thank you for the feedback

Drew 09.01.2019, 20:23:41

very nice story

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Sage Greg 14.01.2019, 11:35:46

Drew, Thank you :)

Jeanette Adams 06.01.2019, 23:45:24

??

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 07.01.2019, 08:42:16

Jeanette Adams, About that... I sent a reply but it didn't show so I tried to remove my reply to write a new one and the entire thing got removed instead , sorry about that, but I really appreciate your comment and the fact that you took the time to comment

Sage Greg 05.01.2019, 15:57:31

Thank you guys for reading, I honestly don't know what's wrong with my phone, it keeps messing up so I can't seem to reply everyone BTW thank you

Lucy Roy 01.01.2019, 20:34:24

I´m impressed

The last comment in the thread:

Sage Greg 05.01.2019, 15:53:09

Lucy Roy, Well I'm glad,

Jeanette Adams 31.12.2018, 12:46:31

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Sage Greg 05.01.2019, 15:52:23

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Samantha Ainsley 05.01.2019, 00:52:57

can´t be better

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