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uncontrollable

Sage Greg

Story about:tragedy, lust, blood

Rating:
12
140 8084

Ranking:
#766 in Others
#566 in Short stories


Complete 28 pages

Publication: 22.12.2018 — 14.01.2019


Description of book "uncontrollable "

Uncontrollable is a short story about a girl who is named Bridgette Henderson, she is a very gorgeous woman at the age of 21 and she has a secret, A very dark secret that no one knows, except Hector Vincent, Hector is in love with Bridgette and turns a blind eye to her dark side and deep down hopes to be with her but knows its impossible.
And then there Duke Harrell the gorgeous popular doctor that steals Bridgettes heart for a little while and loses his own.
The story is a mixture of a messed up love story(not really love story) that doesn't end in a happy ever after.
I hope you enjoy it and give me some feed back on what you think. I'd appreciate it :)

Also DISCLAIMER : The book may contain some scenes that might be uncomfortable to the reader

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Maria Liaqat
10.07.2021, 15:13:54

Superb book

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Heather Navy
16.01.2019, 15:45:43

too impressed

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:38:46

Heather Navy, I'm glad, thanks

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Jeanette Adams
20.01.2019, 14:28:15

sometimes it is a little bit uncomfortable to read:)

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:38:28

Jeanette Adams, hehe yeah...my bad..

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Kerry Ward
21.01.2019, 13:53:42

wow, it is awesome

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:38:05

Kerry Ward, thank you! I'm glad you liked it

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Ana Arrigo
23.01.2019, 15:17:50

fantastic

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:37:45

Ana Arrigo, thanks!

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Rashi Sharma
06.05.2019, 19:17:03

This book, I must say, clinged me to carry on reading until completed it!
I am in really love with this story.
A really good fiction.
Keep it up!

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:37:13

Rashi Sharma, aww thanks
I will try my best!

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Mwanaidi Said
09.07.2019, 15:53:12

I loved the story, I just wished Hector could save or cure her and they could live a happy life as the girl didn't want to kill... (just in my thoughts) ;)

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:36:40

Mwanaidi Said, I'm glad you did.
I actually had thought of that but In the end the story wrote itself if that makes sense. btw thanks for the comment

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Annalyn Fernandez
10.04.2020, 23:12:00

This book is good. It shows how life is sometimes too hard for someone to endure pains in life. Hope to read more stories from you .

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:34:39

Annalyn Fernandez, thank you, I am glad you liked it. I will try to reach your expectations :D

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Enigma
23.05.2020, 12:56:59

It's uncontrollable to stop me from falling in love with this fantastic piece of art. It's just awesome. I really liked it a lot.

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:33:13

Enigma, aww thanks!

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Ryo Francis
07.06.2020, 04:57:08

(1). Love the short chapters, but your paragraphs are way too long making your story so much harder to read
(2). Your tragic story has a great message :)

Sage Greg
28.07.2020, 13:32:48

Ryo Francis, thanks!
I see, I will keep that in mind and do something about it.
I appreciate your comment

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ESTHER OKEKE
08.04.2019, 19:01:41

critically

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True Match
17.01.2019, 19:34:35

oh no

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Jenny
13.01.2019, 15:38:34

it is really impressive, provokes many feelings

Sage Greg
14.01.2019, 09:37:21

Jenny, I'm glad. Thank you for the feedback

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Drew
09.01.2019, 20:23:41

very nice story

Sage Greg
14.01.2019, 09:35:46

Drew, Thank you :)

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Jeanette Adams
06.01.2019, 23:45:24

??

Sage Greg
07.01.2019, 06:42:16

Jeanette Adams, About that... I sent a reply but it didn't show so I tried to remove my reply to write a new one and the entire thing got removed instead , sorry about that, but I really appreciate your comment and the fact that you took the time to comment

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Sage Greg
05.01.2019, 15:57:31

Thank you guys for reading, I honestly don't know what's wrong with my phone, it keeps messing up so I can't seem to reply everyone BTW thank you

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Lucy Roy
01.01.2019, 20:34:24

I´m impressed

Sage Greg
05.01.2019, 13:53:09

Lucy Roy, Well I'm glad,

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Jeanette Adams
31.12.2018, 12:46:31

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Sage Greg
05.01.2019, 13:52:23

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Samantha Ainsley
05.01.2019, 00:52:57

can´t be better

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