Two short chapters uploaded and Thanks!

Thank you to everyone for reading this story. I'm so happy that you are enjoying it.

I've uploaded two short chapters today. These are the "calm before the storm".

I'm in the process of fixing previous chapters. Correcting grammar, getting rid of passive voice (I'm so bad with that!), etc. I will also be correcting the story.

For example, to my horror, I noticed the High Father mentions the moon Europa instead of the exoplanet Jericho. Originally, they were going to Europa, but because of....stuff you'll see later... I changed it to an exoplanet. I've also seen that I've typed "High Command" instead of "Holy Command". Oops. Gotta fix those.

So you will see reuploads of previous chapters. If there is any plot information that is different, I'll bold it. For the most part, it's just grammar stuff.

Again, thank you so much for enjoying my book. I hope to keep it up. And please, please, please feel free to contact me with any comments, good or bad.

Take care and hugs and licks.

Josie A.