We are past the halfway mark of the book.
I'll admit to being worried about these two characters. I'm writing them a little out of my comfort zone because I want each of them to have their own unique voice and yet still show the comradery between the two of them. So if you guys have any suggestions on how I should write them, or change the dialog to make give them more of their own voice, I'd love to hear it.
In fact, I'd love to hear any criticisms or suggestions you have.
Soon, I'll be uploading a revised version of the previous chapters. I'm kind of in a groove writing now, so I'm going to try to bang off a couple of more chapter first drafts. I'm seeing the end of the tunnel and the train don't wanna stop. :-)
Thank you all for reading and enjoy it (I hope).
Hugs and licks.
Josie A.
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Log inhello, I intend to read your book and sorry I haven't got there yet as I have a bit on at the moment. I will get there though and comment. In the meantime, have you joined our Writer's Group community for booknet writers, on facebook?
Josie A., full credit for the idea goes to Ruechari (Charity) I wouldn't have thought of it either ;)
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