I Need Help Finishing The Plot Of Concealed Flames

Am stuck guys, and I need help.....

Like I said in my first post about this book, it was going to be a collective efforts project. Now is the time to drop your recommendations on how you think the book should end, or progress from here.

What are your thoughts about the book so far, and what do you want to feel at the end. A good feeling, happy, sad, surprised e.t.c.

I don't know how this story ends, and it driving my crazy because I don't know how to move from here. Building the rest of the plot is easy because I know what I want for them.

But how does the bad guy gets exposed? What do you all want for Michael and Katrina? What happens at AFC? How do I present the big reveal of the bad guy?

 

I need all the help I can get..... Please..... I don't mind merging all the ideas into the plot.... Just let me have all you can give....

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Sa Ge I
23.06.2021, 18:37:11

So I'd say the story should have a happy ending.
In the sense that Michael and Aurora ends up close do many bad things because they're the reason why we're reading the story in the first place society will talk and all that but all that's to it..society won't make us happy we can't possibly satisfy them joepardising ours.
So Katrina and Michael's relationship has to strive no matter what.
Then afc betrayals comes in make their downfall so hard and brutal... Makes the story like it's only Katrina can make the company go up in flames no other person she's the only one capable
Make it look easy as we might lose interest if we don't get the exact picture we want.
About making the revelation of this so called big guy coming make it easy too because he's not so important also reveal why he hates Katrina so much.
In all this odds to come include Michael too because he has to be by Katrina side when she's facing all these problems that's where Katrina will feel the real chemistry and and some hot scene too you do know what I mean it's a concealed flame of hot desires you've to bend the story to what you pictured And you're good to go.
I hope this helps and that's all there's to say.

O.J Ebubeoha
23.06.2021, 19:50:53

Sa Ge I, You really do have a lot of expectations my darling... Am glad I made the right choice to include all of you in writing this book. Makes it all the more meaningful.
I will try to work through all of these and pick those that would resonate well with the book.
Thank you so very much.

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Sheeba Pratheesh
23.06.2021, 11:07:06

Dear author ,
We would like to have a happy ending .
Also the bad guy should also taste the bitterness of his own actions in the most severe way .He killed Oliver after utilizing him in to plot against Kat without any remorse

O.J Ebubeoha
23.06.2021, 13:06:32

Sheeba Pratheesh, Thank you... I will take note of it.... Appreciate your contribution

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A Pamela Carlisle-Calix
23.06.2021, 09:58:55

I haven’t read this one yet but I will start today give me a lil time before you decide let me read and I’ll give my input I have loved all the rest of your stories

O.J Ebubeoha
23.06.2021, 10:52:38

A Pamela Carlisle-Calix, Okay dear... I will do just that. Thank you for your kind words. Hope to hear from you soon.

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