Hello guys, I started a book and already published the first chapter of my new story 'The Mafia's Wife'. Please read the description and the chapter and give a review of it. So, I could do better in my work and will give you a very interesting story. 

Here's a description below:

As she saw that terrible scene she gasped in shock and moved a step back which made some noise. As Kabir heard some noises he got alert and ordered Jack, " Get that person immediately." 
Jack who also got alert till now nodded at his order and walked towards the entrance. As Sameera saw that guy coming towards her she got scared and quickly climbed up the stairs but it was too late and was caught by Jack.
 As Sameera was brought into that room Kabir's eyes got narrowed and a devil smirk appeared on his face which made Sameera gulp in tear. 
Kabir moved towards her and caressed her lower lip with his rough thumb which sent a shiver to her spine.
She realised that she saw something which she shouldn't see but now she was trapped in this hell with the devil who was her own husband!!