The Secrets Hidden In The Scars: Chapter 23

Hey, everybody! I am coming to you with a new update! Chapter 23 from my book "The Secrets Hidden In The Scars" is available now for reading. The first part is here, the second part is here. From the next time, I will be publishing new chapters in the third part of the book. Yeah, it's super long... But... So what?

Tada-a-a-a-a! Here's the chapter, in which someone starts finally to work their brains more or less well and realize their stupidity. And yeah, I am publishing this chapter on November, 30th, one week before my birthday. I'd like to try to publish a new chapter right on my birthday, but I ain't sure if I can do this. Though, as they say, never say never. If I work hard, I can do this. Anyway, I promise that the next chapter is going to be much more interesting. I think I can call it the peak of my little perverted fantasy, which keeps inspiring me to force my characters to go wild and make people wonder who would think of writing this stuff.

Anyway, I would be madly happy if you liked this book, added it to your library and told me what you think of the storyline and the characters' actions. I hope you would't lose your interest for my book and would read it until the very end. My English is not perfect, but I'm doing my best to make my texts more or less readable.

To get a mood for reading, play the song Aly & AJ — Never Far Behind, the lyrics of which were used for the orginal title of the character.

Here's a little (slightly changed for this post) snippet from one of the parts, which will be published within a few days:

"Don't say I ain't right!" Natalia throws irritably. "You were bitten through a long time ago and caught on the lie and betrayal. Your brother and soon-to-be sister-in-law do know what a dirty thing you did. And be sure, Edward, they won't leave it unnoticed. Even your mother is ready to go against you and forget that she carried and gave birth to such a horrible sonny."

"Don't pretend to be holy, Natalia! You made the people sure that you loved me, even if your love didn't belong to any men you'd ever slept with. You washed everybody's brains so well that they believed you got feelings for me and even turned them against me by saying I allegedly wanted to kill and rob them. You needed just one word to make them sure about my betrayal. ONE, THE HECK! You became an innocent lamb for them and made me a bastard. You are happy that everybody calls you holy, innocent, poor, and unhappy."

"They pity me because they do worry! None of them would wish even their biggest enemy to have the situation that I got into!"

"Ha, what kind of situation did you get into?" Edward asks coldly, crossing his arms over his chest. "You did your best for everybody to pity you, not to judge?"

"I did nothing bad to be judged. I didn't betray, didn't kill, didn't rob, and didn't slander. I am really holy!"

"Aha, as innocent as a virgin! Ugh! How many stupid and blind people are living in the world! Even your freaking lover doesn't know what a false egoistic bitch you are!"

"I'm not false!" Natalia shouts, starting to breathe heavily, struggling with a wish to cry and barely holding herself down not to tell the truth about who Edward thinks is her lover actually is. "Not the heck false! NOT FALSE! AND THAT MAN IS NOT MY LOVER!"

"Oh, she is not false!" Edward smirks with irony, rolling his eyes, and tightly clenches his hands into fists. "NOT FALSE!"

"YES, NOT FALSE!"

"Stop continuing this show, you, freaking actress! Is it so hard to confess that you cheated on me with that ugly cad? Why can't you still say, 'Yes, I cheated on you and don't love you anymore! I'm sorry about it!' Is it so hard to find the courage to say the words you should've said on the day when I showed the photos to you?"

"Why do I explain something to the one, who turned into a psycho and was almost ready to kill me in anger?" Natalia wonders irritably and loudly.

"But no!" Edward starts gesticulating actively, being excited and breathing heavily enough. "Instead, you started a wild hysteria and pretended to be a victim of a crime! To pity me and make me sure that you were the fuck slandered!"

"I was really slandered!" Natalia shouts with wet eyes. "SLANDERED! I'M GUILTY OF NOTHING!"

"Stop, Rochester, enough!" Edward sharply waves a hand. "You'll never understand what I felt when I saw those photos. I refused to believe that my girlfriend dared to do such a cruel thing to me. I was calming myself down with the thought that it wasn't true. Thought my eyes lied to me. I wanted to fret and fume from anger! You don't imagine how terribly I felt! How many hairs I've pulled out after your betrayal was indirectly confirmed by you. You denied it and explained nothing. So, you confirmed you slept with that freak."

Have a good day!
Love, Estrella Rose.