Jasper in January - Updates

I've finally gotten around to updating my book Jasper in January here.

I've been off the site for some time banging away at Jasper in January as my release date on Amazon looms large in the distance. I missed the first deadline, and it looks like I'm going to miss the second one too as I haven't had the opportunity to send off for any professional editing which it is in dire need of. 

I posted it here to hopefully get some eyes on it and see whether people can read all the flipping around I'm doing in the timeline. 

What it should look like is: 

Present day one week ago.

Flashback to five years ago. 

Present day one week prior, day one. 

Present day one week prior, day two.

Present day one week prior, day three. 

Then present day. But I don't know if it reads like that. Haha!

I hope everyone here has been writing up a storm, while I've been away whittling at my work in progress.

Let me know what you think. I'm still plucking away at it. I recently hit 26,350 words and I'm 29 chapters in. 

I look forward to reading more of everyone's stuff. I'd best get on it!

Sharon