I think in a way he did proved his love he knew if she moved on he wouldn't be able to see her with another man and would kill her so he let go that's his Love for Mihika I wonder how did he fall in love with her was it love at first sight ?? Who knows
The ending definitely felt rushed I did thought he might do that after what she said I wish when they were living together in Delhi he would have regretted his decisions I like how strong and keen Mihika was to run away from him I felt sad for him but he is a murderer can't forget that he knew he can't see her with anyone else so ... But Advay wanted children even if he died atleast that wish of his got completed I honestly didn't expected this ending but at one point I stopped shipping them as well he was too biased towards his father and I blame his dad I wish he would have protected his Mother and talked with his father when he was young sad for Advay he was lonely but he wasn't any better than his Dad overall a Grey character felt bad for him but he was equally wrong as well :(
I don't know why I feel bad GE surely deserve punishment but not suicide ..... he deserve a happy family with is wife sister and kid .... this end is incomplete please author I really want their happy ending I am waiting for part 2 if this book
its not write ending ..... I was thinking advay should join phycologists and have therapy and he will be alright he also want happy normal family nothing else .. I really don't consider its end .... please don't make advay dead please please its really un digest able thing
I feel sad for her. I feel he is bad person I know .but i don't feel right because he imagined a family with baby . I think whatever he done he deserve punishment but not sucuide .you have done wonderful work by these work I love it.thank you author
Hey,I just wanted to say that u don't need to apologise for giving us not so happy ending....that is life....not a fairytale....the story is really good...i think he committed suicide after realising his deeds ,he just needed someone to guide him properly without any lies...but it was too late now...he couldn't undo anything he did...he died for his family only...for their happiness and peace...I feel sorry for him for his toxic childhood and for her for her toxic childhood and marriege...but she came out strong and I'm sure she will give her son good life lessons❣️
poor advay. i hope mihika will help him to heal up. he has witness so much abuse as a child its messing up his rationality.
Thanks for the update author
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Log inworst story i have ever read
not a satisfying ending expecting a better one
i really wish that this book has a part two
i don't like the end author.plz write a 2nd part.
Wow..I wish he could have confronted his demons.
Very well writte.
First he saved his mother and yhen his wife by killing himself otherwise ashray would have done it.
awesome work author
I think in a way he did proved his love he knew if she moved on he wouldn't be able to see her with another man and would kill her so he let go that's his Love for Mihika I wonder how did he fall in love with her was it love at first sight ?? Who knows
amazing book but I think so he did not left Reena to die she will be save because I feel its not necessary to make her dead
Zaitoon, Oh happy to hear that
The ending definitely felt rushed I did thought he might do that after what she said I wish when they were living together in Delhi he would have regretted his decisions I like how strong and keen Mihika was to run away from him I felt sad for him but he is a murderer can't forget that he knew he can't see her with anyone else so ... But Advay wanted children even if he died atleast that wish of his got completed I honestly didn't expected this ending but at one point I stopped shipping them as well he was too biased towards his father and I blame his dad I wish he would have protected his Mother and talked with his father when he was young sad for Advay he was lonely but he wasn't any better than his Dad overall a Grey character felt bad for him but he was equally wrong as well :(
Advay domestic abuse aur uske Dad aur Reema ko marne ke liye deserve krta hai What Nidhi did was self defence
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Ye Nidhi itni khush q lag rhi hai ?
Oh Nooo Wait Really Advay did that because of some reason Maybe to protest Mihika it's not Advay punish him for trying to kill Reema not this
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Mihika aise situation me bhi hasaati hai bichaari ?
Wo change ho raha hai par wo murderer bhi to hai Dad ka smjh Aya par wo Reema.. :(
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I don't know why I feel bad GE surely deserve punishment but not suicide ..... he deserve a happy family with is wife sister and kid .... this end is incomplete please author I really want their happy ending I am waiting for part 2 if this book
its not write ending ..... I was thinking advay should join phycologists and have therapy and he will be alright he also want happy normal family nothing else .. I really don't consider its end .... please don't make advay dead please please its really un digest able thing
author, i love this book keep going....
I feel sad for her. I feel he is bad person I know .but i don't feel right because he imagined a family with baby . I think whatever he done he deserve punishment but not sucuide .you have done wonderful work by these work I love it.thank you author
Es la tercera vez que me quedo con este mal sabor de boca con un final muy abrupto
authorrr is this the end n author i love u n this bookkkk
Zaitoon, well that was a great book author ...iam so luv with this book ..author is there any part -2
Tienen la sangre envenenada todos locos
Realmente quería que Advay cambiará, porque en el fondo el tenía mucho amor. :(
Hey,I just wanted to say that u don't need to apologise for giving us not so happy ending....that is life....not a fairytale....the story is really good...i think he committed suicide after realising his deeds ,he just needed someone to guide him properly without any lies...but it was too late now...he couldn't undo anything he did...he died for his family only...for their happiness and peace...I feel sorry for him for his toxic childhood and for her for her toxic childhood and marriege...but she came out strong and I'm sure she will give her son good life lessons❣️
Thanks for the update.
At least she survived.
Pero que diablos, esto está descabellado
Please don't make him die ...he also need a chance to live and feel loveee ...no.one understand him not even mihika
Minhika le pudoo haber dado la oportunidad talvez si él no hubiera intentado matar a la pobre chica ಠ_ಠ
Sin duda alguna Advay es un asesino ,manipulador y mentiroso ಠ︵ಠ
author made my day lub u n take care
kimtaejoe, Love you too:)
He will find her and impregnate her for sure !!!!
Reem Awad, Maybe:)
Please let her run away forever! And please the other girl he almost killed let her live writer !
Fair Lady, She survived :)
That's horrible :( I thought he'll improve and become better
Reem Awad, Improving is not so easy :)
En verdad la quiere, pero su amor está mal encausado y repite la misma historia
Andrea Castillo, Muchas Gracias Por Leer.:)
Realmente me gustaría que el cambiará pero creo que jamás lo hara
That's Messed Up but still he is a murderer...
Thanks for the update
I liked this chapter, short but full of shock a d emotions
Advay suffered alot....please dont make separate from mihika author
I really hope he didn't kill that girl. After hearing his past I want him to get treated and become better for her :(
feeling so bad to read the child abuse..... hope mihika help him to cope up his mental trauma...
waiting for next update...I hope they get happy ending
poor advay. i hope mihika will help him to heal up. he has witness so much abuse as a child its messing up his rationality.
Thanks for the update author
Poor Mihika...I hope some one help her
Can't wait for the next update. good job, author.
I can't ship mihika and advay anymore after seeing his this muderer side, he is way to cruel.
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Thanks for the update.
Mihika is dead. I was starting to feel sorry for him but he's crazy just
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