Description of book "Only Mine ( Under Editing) ✓"
"I love you so much, darling. But you need to learn that you won't be going anywhere. You're mine." With that being said, his other hand slides down to my waist "Your entire body, your mind, your soul ,All mine.ONLY MINE." All I could do was tremble at his touch.How can someone so beautiful be so heartless?All a 21 year old Anna Smith wanted to do was a study in famous college make a proud daughter to his father. Unfortunately for her, ruthless and cunning 26 year old billionaire LOUIS ENFIEL KNIGHT had other plans for her. He lust her with the first meeting later on his lust turn into obsession for an waiting for the perfect moment to marry her and finally make her his queen .He'd kill anyone who gets in the way of getting what he wants.What will happen when he ruins everything in her.
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Log inwhat is the name of your second book
Shivika Sundar, thanx
Nice storyline and good plot story even there is some vocabularies mistakes but still can be edited. After been edited, this story is interesting to read. Next book 2 to read
Shivika, yes, i love the book 2 story ....i have read few chapters and the vocabulary much better and enjoyable and fascinating to read . Good work author.
There are also some grammatical mistake please read books of other author you will know how to write like in which format to write which would be interesting
Dream Soul, like i said l wrote when I'm younger self , if you read futher more , u know that , I'll correct it then an there, so i know how to write now ...even i love others author they are inspiring me ,chapters 01 i edited now , (CHAPTER-2 to 20 i will rectify with a daily basis) more over thanks for the respectable comments for me
I would have liked the story but I can't get pass the grammar. But I still want to know how it will go.
christiana apau, chapters 01 i edited now , (CHAPTER-2 to 20 i will rectify with a daily basis) , thanks for the humble comments
You could improve your writing format you know every dialogue is so jumbling it's confusing like who is saying what
Dream Soul, thanks for the humble comments love
i just love your story hope I will soon see the next part keep writing ....
Sunaina, ok dear , try to read your mine ever
AUTHOR :
i need to edit my ONLY MINE book, so it's bit hard to read from beginning but after some chapter's you will not experienced such a mistakes so, I'm working on it ..... every human done some mistakes , you guys are demotivating me , but i done some progress to write in a book two ,if you guys love my book love , or else i don't know what will I say ?
Your use of English language is horrible.
Samiat Bisiriyu, my book is under editing , book two you might get a proper grammar.
Please try to improve your English the books ia actually an interesting 1 but difficult to read and understand
Shivika, even more today onwards you will get a good chapters first chapter i updated just tell me your opinion
The Grammer is wanting and it makes it hard to enjoy the story
Shivika, I write when I'm young without knowing of some grammar , now i learn and working on it too, so don't worry you will enjoy my current and upcoming books , i hope I will not disappoint u in a next arrival books
Hi..obviously English is not your first language..I applaud you for trying to write in different language than yours, but the poor Grammer is making it so hard to read and enjoy the story.. I would like to suggest for you to ask for a proof reading service through the App that way your work will gain more attention.
please don't get my comments negatively but as an improving points for future... good luck
Abeer Qaryouti, thanks for the suggestions , I'm working for it
Hola, cómo estás?
Excelente historia, ansiosa por leer el próximo libro.
Una pequeña sugerencia sería que mejores la pésima traducción, por lo demás no tengo queja alguna. Gracias.
Felicitaciones, feliz noche!¡
Shivika, Hola!!
Ok, hablamos pronto, un abrazo!¡
I don't know what she is gonna ask but I think Louise will get angry with it. Nice update author! :)
sarah sultana, tq sweet heart
iam so happy your back shivika:)
sarah sultana, yaa , even I'm saraha
How long do you plan to keep this book on hold? If you don’t plan to continue it can you please let your fans/supports know. I understand if you can sometimes life gets in the way but I’d like to remove it from my library if you can. Hope all is well.
Ronda Workman Wellman, sry for the things I just a healthy issue...I'm working now ...soon I update my story
author plz update!
Hey author about to start this story looks interesting please update consistently ??
Jessie Michael, thank you , yaa sure
Good work author very complicated relation but good nobody is understands what she wants i hope her family and Louis understand her
love the story line:)
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actually I m not getting your updated chapters. I don't why.
their may be some technical issues. how can I solve it. do u have any idea.
I m very eager to read your next chapters plz help me.
Shivika, KKK..
thank u
I can't get the update?? why??
Jayshree Bora, im updating
unable to view after episode 18 why
R, I need to write
Nice update shivika
sarah sultana, tq
hii update plzz:)
Shivika, hi author plz update iam waiting:)
sarahsultana6
yes iam in insta and snap chat
what about you?
sarah sultana, insta I'd dear
I think Louis is very judgemental about Anna I just hope he is not too late to know his real feelings
and Anna is like a scard puppy right now;) but she will get strong I hope!
thanks for the update:)
Shivika, are you in any media?
it's been 2 weeks plzz update!
Shivika, I will definitely I'm really looking forward to your book and you really deserve appreciation for this author for your hard work:)
plzz update can't wait I really liked this story
Great work author!!:))
Im looking forward to read this book as its really interesting and good ,hope you update soon.
Joane Catarata, yes tq ..I update soon
beautiful story
Pamela Hardeo, tq baby it's means a lot love my story ever
Will you complete the whole story for free on booknet
Shivika, Ok :)
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Please update ❤
Niya Rahman, tq for the response
waiting for updates...
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