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The Commander

Luse Chintu

Story about:doubt hope renewed hope lust love

Age restriction: 18+

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Ranking:
#111 in Erotic
#75 in Romantic erotica


Complete 112 pages

Publication: 12.04.2020 — 15.08.2020


Description of book "The Commander"

18 year old football quarterback, Logan wanted to spend an evening with Mia, his high school sweetheart and cheerleader. Mia was not allowed to leave her house that evening, unless her first cousin Jayden tugged along.

Great mistake or opportunity?

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AJ Ana
11.03.2021, 10:08:52

Hello , I'm beginner on booknet would you mind to support each other? please follow me on booknet so , I'll follow you back and if you're available on Instagram then @a.j.anastasia it's my username let's Interact I'll glad to be friends as we are on same path our passion is same so , would you mind to interact ?

AJ Ana ;)

AJ Ana
13.03.2021, 12:28:59

Luse Chintu, It's really kind of you to say that .

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Rose Collins
22.10.2020, 14:11:33

Sweet love story, nothing to graphic

Luse Chintu
22.10.2020, 12:39:15

Rose Collins, Awwww thank you

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Jennifer Zeigler
16.10.2020, 06:05:32

Thank you author for this story. You are such a gifted writer!

Luse Chintu
16.10.2020, 04:20:24

Jennifer Zeigler, Thank you so much. XOXO

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Eloisa Tanlu
08.10.2020, 12:33:57

I had fun reading this story. Thank you

Luse Chintu
08.10.2020, 10:08:37

Eloisa Tanlu, You are so welcome, you still have about 6 more of my books to go! Welcome to the family....XOXO

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Titams Titams
13.09.2020, 04:44:23

i i love it so much. fine story without too much comiccations and negativity twist alon the way.

Luse Chintu
13.09.2020, 08:24:18

Titams Titams, Thank you

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Aurora Baldueza
09.09.2020, 15:38:09

nice ending..good job author

Luse Chintu
09.09.2020, 16:08:35

Aurora Baldueza, Thank you love, please move on to my other books, you wont regret it! WELCOME TO THE FAM!!

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PRINCESS ADEABAH
02.09.2020, 00:57:37

I love this story so much it the best from the start to the end

Luse Chintu
02.09.2020, 03:39:24

PRINCESS ADEABAH, Thank you so much, am glad you loved it!

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Pooja Singh
28.08.2020, 09:57:54

Nicc story

Luse Chintu
28.08.2020, 07:37:02

Pooja Singh, Thank you dear!

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Jess C
20.08.2020, 02:55:41

this was good. though there were mistakes here and there but it's still good.i love it

Luse Chintu
20.08.2020, 04:35:53

Jessie Achen, Thank you

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Jess C
20.08.2020, 02:56:04

very nice

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Grace Esema
17.08.2020, 14:50:42

thanks for the story

Luse Chintu
17.08.2020, 12:00:49

Grace Esema, You are welcome, thanks for reading!!!

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Titi
16.08.2020, 16:46:01

too short... but a great read... thanks

Luse Chintu
16.08.2020, 14:25:16

Titi, Thank you hun

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Emelia Doot
15.08.2020, 15:55:49

Thanks

Luse Chintu
15.08.2020, 13:05:13

Emelia Doot, You are welcome

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zahra tijjani
15.08.2020, 10:03:15

please when is the next update. tired of waiting

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Steve Lionel Ngomeni
08.07.2020, 11:27:13

His this book finish???

Steve Lionel Ngomeni
13.08.2020, 11:46:38

Luse Chintu, okay

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Grace Esema
13.08.2020, 08:54:12

pls update your story thanks

Luse Chintu
13.08.2020, 06:51:11

Grace Esema, Hello. I will update it this weekend, please read my other books as you wait for an update - Beast, Its complicated, impenetrable XOXO

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Jo Mar
04.07.2020, 18:01:17

Update please ❤️

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Titi
02.07.2020, 00:31:54

please update, we miss you

Titi
02.07.2020, 10:07:04

Luse Chintu, hugs and kisses

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Luse Chintu
02.07.2020, 07:32:49

Hi everyone, i promise to update and finish my book chapters this week end. Please look out for my two new books too!!! Thanks XOXO

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Ishita Shah
30.06.2020, 11:51:29

Please update

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Steve Lionel Ngomeni
28.06.2020, 00:01:05

Please update

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
27.06.2020, 11:06:30

Any updates yet...?

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Steve Lionel Ngomeni
21.06.2020, 13:26:46

wowwwww nice chapter please update

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Jo Mar
17.06.2020, 17:38:07

Teary eyed here

Jo Mar
19.06.2020, 15:18:57

Luse Chintu, ❤️

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Grace Esema
18.06.2020, 08:15:56

wa ooo interesting thanks

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Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
18.06.2020, 01:28:18

Aaawwww thank you commander *sniffing*

Luse Chintu
18.06.2020, 04:25:13

Lol

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Titi
17.06.2020, 15:22:00

Everyone deserves a second chance. Logan is a good guy but made a silly mistake. Wow , but the commander has a big heart likewise Jayden, They fit perfectly.

Luse Chintu
17.06.2020, 13:20:58

Ikr.

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Emelia Doot
15.06.2020, 16:44:31

Ha ha ha., really!..

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Titi
14.06.2020, 22:06:12

hahaha, for real! Thanks Luse

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Steve Lionel Ngomeni
13.06.2020, 14:22:55

3 days ??? Please Luse update

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Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
10.06.2020, 12:03:07

ooohhh I didn't see that coming hahahaha

Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
10.06.2020, 11:54:17

Luse Chintu, lol I'm doing great thanks dear

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Titi
10.06.2020, 14:46:42

hahaha, this is really interesting and funny.. haha

Luse Chintu
10.06.2020, 11:50:47

Lol.

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Titi
09.06.2020, 13:23:39

anticipating the meeting. lol

Titi
09.06.2020, 11:07:18

Luse Chintu, Haha Haha, my thoughts exactly but Creg is matured enough to know how to deal... it will be fun

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Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
09.06.2020, 13:29:28

oh I can't wait for Edward to meet Craig the testosterone

Luse Chintu
09.06.2020, 10:31:25

I know right, it just got real. Lol

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Titi
05.06.2020, 23:02:32

wonderful! I really enjoyed reading

Luse Chintu
07.06.2020, 19:35:31

Awwww

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Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
06.06.2020, 17:43:01

aaaaaawww *sniffing*

Luse Chintu
07.06.2020, 19:35:13

Ikr.....

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
06.06.2020, 21:27:03

Cute

Luse Chintu
07.06.2020, 19:34:54

Awwwww

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Annalyn V. Fernandez
07.06.2020, 21:13:41

I am enjoying this book a lot. Keep it up.

Luse Chintu
07.06.2020, 19:34:18

Thank you XOXO

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Steve Lionel Ngomeni
05.06.2020, 21:43:58

Wowww love it thanks for the update

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
05.06.2020, 16:18:52

Wow...what a turn of event...I feel sad for Mia...she's very mature in forgiving Logan..but...I'm happy too for she has Creg!! Had she not met Creg,Mia would be so devastated!! Ummm...I'm very happy for Cre-Mia!!

Luse Chintu
05.06.2020, 14:13:14

Cre-Mia awwwwww

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
05.06.2020, 16:19:19

Wow!! Its lovely!!

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Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
05.06.2020, 15:01:49

here I thought we was cheating on Logan and been doing his baba mama lol we ain't guilty no more. lol

Benedicta Emefa Amedeka
05.06.2020, 12:39:13

Luse Chintu, this is going to be fun I can't wait for the next update

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Jo Mar
05.06.2020, 14:33:53

Here they are Logan and Amira.. It's a cool break up between Logan And Mia. More updates please ❤️

Luse Chintu
05.06.2020, 12:10:00

Here they are indeed!

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Titi
04.06.2020, 15:16:26

why is Creg so forgiving, to imagine livie tried to kill him? please update soon so we see how Logan's POV

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
04.06.2020, 07:34:46

Brave Mia!!

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Tabitha Mutashi
03.06.2020, 01:33:47

wow its getting more interesting

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
02.06.2020, 21:02:23

More updates please author...

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Sweetty Lyngdohmawlong
02.06.2020, 21:00:39

Haha...he(Creg) really did give them an in expectable slap on the faces...oh god..Olivia tried to play angel...haha..hmmm...I love this chapter !! They had just underestimated him!!

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Titi
02.06.2020, 20:04:05

Creg is so cool. pls more updates

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Jo Mar
01.06.2020, 19:21:25

Logan is cheating on Mia.. It's another love story of Mia and Creg. Love it❤️ more update pls.

Jo Mar
02.06.2020, 13:00:46

Lol

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