Hii again, this chapter (Deal with the Devil) is really good specially the way u described Lucifer focusing on his small detailings like his polish shoes and black suit , his throne and obviously the way he sits on his throne, the perfect timing for his sarcastic and serious tones....
Hii I had just read your book and it's amazing and it seems like your research about Angels & Devil is soo good and adequate. I have completed this book in 2 hrs and I can't wait for the next chapters.......
Anurag Patel, Hey anurag thank u for reading this. HAHA and yes i have been reading alot of books about devil and angels so that gave me alot info. And i'm about upload a chapter rn so read it !! i hope you'd like it
I thought this seemed promising but there are too many grammatical errors for me to overlook. I really like the story line but next time an editor might help. I am more than happy to assist you in the future with other stories and am not looking for money just a helpful editor to make some suggestions about sentence structure and word usage that is all.
Just started reading. Sounds very promising. And the cover looks fantastic.
I added your story to my library and followed you.
Would you please consider following back?
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Anurag Patel 24.04.2020, 20:56:18
Hii again, this chapter (Deal with the Devil) is really good specially the way u described Lucifer focusing on his small detailings like his polish shoes and black suit , his throne and obviously the way he sits on his throne, the perfect timing for his sarcastic and serious tones....
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Mahnoor Khan 25.04.2020, 20:04:45
Anurag Patel, Hey anurag. Thank u for taking out time and reading this :) Do give it a like please. Thanks once again
Anurag Patel 24.04.2020, 20:48:59
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Anurag Patel 24.04.2020, 00:25:21
Hii I had just read your book and it's amazing and it seems like your research about Angels & Devil is soo good and adequate. I have completed this book in 2 hrs and I can't wait for the next chapters.......
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Mahnoor Khan 24.04.2020, 02:16:42
Anurag Patel, Hey anurag thank u for reading this. HAHA and yes i have been reading alot of books about devil and angels so that gave me alot info. And i'm about upload a chapter rn so read it !! i hope you'd like it
Jeniveve 01.04.2020, 21:24:47
I thought this seemed promising but there are too many grammatical errors for me to overlook. I really like the story line but next time an editor might help. I am more than happy to assist you in the future with other stories and am not looking for money just a helpful editor to make some suggestions about sentence structure and word usage that is all.
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Mahnoor Khan 02.04.2020, 13:24:26
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Oreofeoluwa Adejoke 21.02.2020, 21:15:41
interesting
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Mahnoor Khan 23.02.2020, 13:06:26
Oreofeoluwa Adejoke, Thank you.
Cyprian Okwudili 17.02.2020, 15:48:48
Wow this is very interesting
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Mahnoor Khan 17.02.2020, 17:31:34
Cyprian Okwudili, Thank you so muchhhh !!!
Salome Ogunshola 14.02.2020, 13:00:05
Please it should be completed soon
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Mahnoor Khan 14.02.2020, 17:36:11
Salome Ogunshola, Thanks for the like And yes it will be complete soon !!
Izzy 03.02.2020, 15:35:58
Interesting story, I like it a lot! Love the cover btw❤️
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Mahnoor Khan 03.02.2020, 18:25:32
Izzy, Hey izzy? thank u so much. Please keep reading my books !! And m so glad that u liked my story!!
Madufor Emmanuella 04.12.2019, 18:38:16
Interesting,next pks
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Mahnoor Khan 08.12.2019, 23:33:48
madufor m glad that you liked it
Amjid Rasheed 18.10.2019, 13:50:28
Great ❤️
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Batman 24.09.2019, 02:05:05
best ❤
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Mahnoor Khan 24.09.2019, 02:07:47
Batman, thank u
Goodness Shadrach 06.10.2019, 20:46:57
interesting.
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Mahnoor Khan 07.10.2019, 08:07:59
Goodness, m glad you lik it ❤
Mark Pearson 26.07.2019, 13:00:55
great design
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Mahnoor Khan 26.07.2019, 17:03:37
Mark Pearson, Thank u so much
Maira Digt 02.10.2019, 19:34:37
love this cover
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Mahnoor Khan 02.10.2019, 20:46:36
Maira Digt, thankyou
Amjid Rasheed 01.10.2019, 17:22:37
Great .Keep it up...
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Roza Csergo 25.07.2019, 18:03:33
Just started reading. Sounds very promising. And the cover looks fantastic.
I added your story to my library and followed you.
Would you please consider following back?
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Mahnoor Khan 25.07.2019, 19:20:56
Roza Csergo, Aww thank u so much dear. Please share it with your friends and family members and yes i will follow you right away
Christina 28.07.2019, 01:47:34
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Goodness Shadrach 14.08.2019, 11:30:20
shows a promising future, I have added it to my library
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Mahnoor Khan 14.08.2019, 13:01:21
Goodness, Thank u so muchhh !! that means alot
Marilyn Lucero 18.09.2019, 11:53:47
This is interesting
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Mahnoor Khan 18.09.2019, 11:55:18
diamond46, m glad you like it !! i'll update a new chapter today !!