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The first princess of Hell

Mahnoor Khan

Story about:fantasy, angels, heaven and earth

Rating:
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Ranking:
#1086 in Romantic fantasy
#649 in Short stories


Complete 92 pages

Publication: 17.07.2019 — 30.07.2020


Description of book "The first princess of Hell"

One Angel,
One Devil,
One Human.
Three Individuals,One Heart.
Who'd She End Up With?

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Krishna Sangraula
02.11.2021, 08:20:56

Beautiful story.... I lovee it❤️❤️❤️❤️

Mahnoor Khan
29.11.2021, 03:29:02

Krishna Sangraula, Thank you so much. Still getting love for my first writing is like dream come true.

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Obaa Pa
28.11.2020, 14:32:07

uhmm pls how is it possible that Ezakiel who was a male was in love with Lucifer that is Samael. but that is a sin ,he should have been a fallen angel.pls I don't understand can u explain it to me better

Mahnoor Khan
01.01.2021, 04:09:27

Obaa Pa, thank you for taking out time and reading it

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Obaa Pa
28.11.2020, 14:35:04

nice story .l love it

Mahnoor Khan
29.12.2020, 20:36:15

Obaa Pa, Thank you so much for taking out time and reading this.

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stylish khan
30.09.2020, 22:23:40

Oh my God. I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected.Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried.

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stylish khan
23.10.2020, 11:18:39

Mahnoor Khan, if u don't mind can we talk in Inbox ☺️

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Anurag Patel
24.04.2020, 20:56:18

Hii again, this chapter (Deal with the Devil) is really good specially the way u described Lucifer focusing on his small detailings like his polish shoes and black suit , his throne and obviously the way he sits on his throne, the perfect timing for his sarcastic and serious tones....

Mahnoor Khan
25.04.2020, 20:04:45

Anurag Patel, Hey anurag. Thank u for taking out time and reading this :) Do give it a like please. Thanks once again

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Anurag Patel
24.04.2020, 20:48:59

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Anurag Patel
24.04.2020, 00:25:21

Hii I had just read your book and it's amazing and it seems like your research about Angels & Devil is soo good and adequate. I have completed this book in 2 hrs and I can't wait for the next chapters.......

Mahnoor Khan
24.04.2020, 02:16:42

Anurag Patel, Hey anurag thank u for reading this. HAHA and yes i have been reading alot of books about devil and angels so that gave me alot info. And i'm about upload a chapter rn so read it !! i hope you'd like it

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Jeniveve
01.04.2020, 21:24:47

I thought this seemed promising but there are too many grammatical errors for me to overlook. I really like the story line but next time an editor might help. I am more than happy to assist you in the future with other stories and am not looking for money just a helpful editor to make some suggestions about sentence structure and word usage that is all.

Mahnoor Khan
02.04.2020, 13:24:26

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Oreofeoluwa Adejoke
21.02.2020, 21:15:41

interesting

Mahnoor Khan
23.02.2020, 13:06:26

Oreofeoluwa Adejoke, Thank you.

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Cyprian Okwudili
17.02.2020, 15:48:48

Wow this is very interesting

Mahnoor Khan
17.02.2020, 17:31:34

Cyprian Okwudili, Thank you so muchhhh !!!

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Salome Ogunshola
14.02.2020, 13:00:05

Please it should be completed soon

Mahnoor Khan
14.02.2020, 17:36:11

Salome Ogunshola, Thanks for the like And yes it will be complete soon !!

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Izzy
03.02.2020, 15:35:58

Interesting story, I like it a lot! Love the cover btw❤️

Mahnoor Khan
03.02.2020, 18:25:32

Izzy, Hey izzy? thank u so much. Please keep reading my books !! And m so glad that u liked my story!!

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Madufor Emmanuella
04.12.2019, 18:38:16

Interesting,next pks

Mahnoor Khan
08.12.2019, 23:33:48

madufor m glad that you liked it

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Amjid Rasheed
18.10.2019, 13:50:28

Great ❤️

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Batman
24.09.2019, 02:05:05

best ❤

Mahnoor Khan
24.09.2019, 02:07:47

Batman, thank u

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Goodness Shadrach
06.10.2019, 20:46:57

interesting.

Mahnoor Khan
07.10.2019, 08:07:59

Goodness, m glad you lik it ❤

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Mark Pearson
26.07.2019, 13:00:55

great design

Mahnoor Khan
26.07.2019, 17:03:37

Mark Pearson, Thank u so much

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Maira Digt
02.10.2019, 19:34:37

love this cover

Mahnoor Khan
02.10.2019, 20:46:36

Maira Digt, thankyou

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Amjid Rasheed
01.10.2019, 17:22:37

Great .Keep it up...

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Roza Csergo
25.07.2019, 18:03:33

Just started reading. Sounds very promising. And the cover looks fantastic.
I added your story to my library and followed you.
Would you please consider following back?

Mahnoor Khan
25.07.2019, 19:20:56

Roza Csergo, Aww thank u so much dear. Please share it with your friends and family members and yes i will follow you right away

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Christina
28.07.2019, 01:47:34

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Goodness Shadrach
14.08.2019, 11:30:20

shows a promising future, I have added it to my library

Mahnoor Khan
14.08.2019, 13:01:21

Goodness, Thank u so muchhh !! that means alot

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Marilyn Lucero
18.09.2019, 11:53:47

This is interesting

Mahnoor Khan
18.09.2019, 11:55:18

diamond46, m glad you like it !! i'll update a new chapter today !!

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