Description of book "Sebastian's Obsession"
"Please don't do this , I don't want to marry you" pleaded the girl , "You don't have choice but to obey me , my flower" announced Sebastian. "But you are.........
Sebastian who's obsessed with his friends daughter, wants to protect her , wants her to his side forever.......
Sebastian D'Angelo a billionaire who's is obsessed with petal, he keeps tabs on her by stalking her, He doesn't like when FL talks with other guys , he loves her but he didn't let anyone know about this, waiting for right time to make her as his wife.
Petal viotto a simple & beautiful girl who's happy in her own world which have her family , friends & her favorite hobby "art".want to complete her graduation & get a good job. Unaware of her Sebastian's love towards her.
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Laila Naseem, thank you :-)
i really doNot Know, ur BookCover is Xtremely Hard 2c
Laila Naseem, I'll change it into other one wait
Hello there, hope allz Gr8
Can u Show a Clear Cover of ur Story the Book Coverz Hard 2c
Laila Naseem, actually I don't know how to post pictures in story, I will be eager to learn if you tell me method
welcome dear, feel free to ask question when you are confused :-)
Nice updates I love it, thank you ???
Are Penelope and Sebastian real siblings??
Albetros, oh thanks for the clarification author otherwise it would have been a cringey situation to think of..:P
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I dont like sebastian
Dezrene Gardner, you will hate him more in next chapters
lovely
nice update
hehehe amazing
hello author! How do i contact uh?
Albetros, im here with a author's invitation for uh
I have crossed my fingers..... please update soon u r keeping me on my toes
lovely. looking forward what will happen next
Amrita Koul, Same here
Nice update
amazing
when is ur next update....
Laila Naseem, same here, stay safe :-)
Dear author it's a humble suggestion to reduce the description of day to day routine like waking up, butler telling 'Ready sir',having breakfast, bathing etc. It will sound a bit foolish from the characters point of view , specially male leads point of view. Make sure that what you want to describe is crisp and to the point with the hint to spicy emotions without beating around the bush. Some grammatical mistakes are to be rectified. Other than that the flow of the story is interesting. Hoping that ideas and stars be blessed to you.
Carnation, thank you for your suggestion, it's like this that I'm writing first time, and yes, there's grammar mistakes, I will try to write as you said, Tq for liking this story and for reading the story :-)
Nice updates, I love it but what took you so long
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Lynn Austria, sorry, I was busy with some functions in my native so, I didn't able to update.
oh my god I am enjoying it. please update soon.
ur writing skills r awesome. great
Amrita Koul, thank you :-)
intresting
Wait i’m confused, is that Sebastian her uncle??
Albetros, 13 yrs older ..right ...
Interesting..please update soon
Nice plot, love it ?
possessive much
I think sebastian is there
good
omg~~~
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